A Poetry Created by the Owner of a Beautiful Light in a Hospital |steemCreated with Sketch.

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Every day we experience important events that are sometimes overlooked. Many of the experiences we go through every day are actually inspiring, have important meanings, and even thrill the heart.

However, all the important events just pass if we don't tie them up. How to tie it? One way is to write in various forms of writing, both in the form of a short note which will be followed by long writing, or in other forms of writing, such as poetry.

This poem was born when I visited Sakinah hospital, in mid-September 2022. In a hospital that was familiar to me in the past, I experienced a memorable event that remains in my heart, now. There was such a strong atmosphere that I poured it into poetry.

I admit it's not a good poem because it writes quickly while sitting on the toilet. Well, the toilet is indeed one of my favorite places to absorb writing inspiration. Therefore, the bathroom at home must be clean and fragrant, because inspiration often crosses there and I often linger in the bathroom.

Don't think the poem is good or not the first time you write it. Poetry is like a diamond, it must be sharpened to shine. It's still a draft, I'll try to make it sparkle. Not like diamonds, but like eyes, I saw in a hospital bed.


A Trace in the Hospital

From atop the inflamed bed,
there was a smell of pain mixed with hope.

The power has been reduced from the owner of the light of love
Lying on the bed, staring at the ceiling without a cloud painting

But sometimes a question mark is also sent
Whether to be interpreted or just an introductory prayer for healing

she looks beautiful when she's lying down
with a freshly created scent
and the only one
to cover a fragile body
One scent with a thousand question marks.

A corner with soft colored traces
revealed when he sent a kiss
on the back of the hand as calm as a lake

Like the peak of taste on the first night,
passing glance
before it disappears from sight
change with the deepest amazement
hanging like the sky
always visible,
even in the dark without stars and moon
Because all the light has left in his eyes

Lhokseumawe, October 4, 2022




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Ilustrasi foto di acara wisuda.


Jejak di Rumah Sakit

Dari atas ranjang yang meradang,
telah menguar aroma luka bercampur asa.

Daya telah berkurang dari pemilik cahaya cinta
Rebah di atas ranjang, menatap langit-langit tanpa lukisan awan

Tapi sesekali dikirim juga tanda yang penuh tanda tanya
Entah untuk diartikan atau hanya sekadar doa pengantar kesembuhan

dia terlihat indah dalam rebah
dengan aroma yang baru selesai diciptakan
dan hanya satu-satunya
untuk membungkusi tubuh yang sedang rapuh
Satu aroma dengan seribu tanda tanya.

Sebuah sudut dengan jejak berwarna lembut
menguak ketika ia mengirim ciuman
pada punggung tangan setenang telaga

Laksana puncak rasa pada malam pertama,
sekilas melintas
sebelum lenyap dari pandangan
berganti dengan takjub terdalam
bergantung seperti langit
senantiasa terlihat,
walau dalam gelap tanpa bintang dan bulan
Sebab seluruh cahaya sudah tertinggal di matanya

Lhokseumawe, 4 Oktober 2022



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 2 years ago 

Puitis that kata-kata jih, meu grok-grok teu oet oeh ta baca 👍

 2 years ago 

Kop brat leubay Dek @midiagam.

 2 years ago 

Beutoi bit.
Logis dan majas.

Kalimat terakhir jih pih sep keren 👍

 2 years ago (edited)

Jago banget bikin puisinya, jadi baper yg baca 😊

 2 years ago 

Tapi @mollymochtar jangan sampai baper, yaaa.....

 2 years ago (edited)

Nih udah baper, soalnya dah duluan baca sampe abis.

  • walau dalam genap tanpa bintang dan bulan
    Sebab seluruh cahaya sudah tertinggal di matanya

Kalimat nya itu yg bikin mewek hehe,

Oh iya itu maksudnyanya , "genap atau gelap tanpa bintang?"

 2 years ago 

Cut Dek Molly memang lisek that, itu maksudnya memang gelap. sudah saya edit.

Kalau gak lisek, ntar komennya tdk tepat sasaran, hehe

Sekarang udah enak bacanya, sempurna 👍

 2 years ago 

Terima kasih atas koreksinya @mollymochtar. Terima kasih juga sudah membaca dengan teliti.

Masama, maksih juga buat vote nya bang Ayijufridar. Saya jadi tambah semangat lagi membuat postingan 😊

 2 years ago 

Kita saling mendukung dan mendoakan, meski kekuatan vote masih sedikit.

 2 years ago 

Wow! I torally lived myself in the piece you have written.
Well done. A great post!

 2 years ago 

Thank you @patjewell. I was inspired by a student of mine while visiting him at the hospital. I went to the hospital often (though I didn't expect it), but the visit made a deep impression.

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