Steemit Open Mic Week 74 - Original Composition: In The Desert Wild

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)

I have been running around steemit pretending to be a poet because I like writing things that rhyme. Truth is, I consider myself more of a songwriter because there is almost always a tune in my head as I write the words. The nice thing about playing "poet" is I do not have to bother with trying to figure out what chords to play!

The chance to be a poet has worked out well, as I can really only write songs when I am alone. I sing them to myself over and over until I like my melody, then go hammer out chords for hours and hours... it is not pleasant and I just can't do it when there is anyone else around. I got sort of used to a lot of alone time, then life changed and the past few years I have had almost none. This week, and we don't know for how long, our roommate is not here. She has gone to care for a terminal friend. Sad as it is, it gave me enough alone time that I actually did something I have not done in years; I finished my "poem" and now it is a song. And this time, I am taking the whole plunge and singing it and posting it on the blockchain...

I want to thank @luzcypher and @pfunk for this tremendous gift to steemit's musicians. I entered once or twice before, but I don't really consider myself a musician any more than I really think I am a poet... I just like to do stuff. :) The flood of people talking about their experiences with Open Mic this past week finally got to me, so here I am. I may not be talented or even very skilled, but there IS music in my soul and I DO want to share it. Thank you to ALL the wonderful people who are part of Open Mic for giving me a safe and fun platform to do so!

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Neon signs and parking lots, just getting by takes all I've got
I walk the streets, people everywhere, a look in their eye like no one's there.
A city's cold in a funny way, sometimes I have to run away

Cuz it has been a while since I skinny dipped under the moon
And let my inner child run free where the river's flowing' through,
Under a starry sky, just my lover and I, in the desert wild.

Hustle through another day, trying to survive, no time to pray
Scurry to my grave to stressed to see all the gifts that were meant for me
There's a better way, a way I know, I might just have to go.

And it has been a while since I skiiny dipped under the moon
And let my inner child run free where the river's flowing through,
Under a starry sky, just my lover and I, in the desert wild.

Here we are, just you and I, beside the river, the moon is high
It's been too long since we did this, allowed ourselves to yield to bliss.
Lets just stay away, leave the rats behind, they'll keep racing, but we will find

Time to spend while skinny dipping under the moon
And letting our inner child run free where the river's flowing through,
Under the starry sky, just my lover and I, in the desert wild.
Under the starry sky, just my lover and I, in the desert wild.

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Thank you so much!

We will never know, before we do so. Remember one thing, the work we do will be worth it, I like your music..

That's a cool upbeat music. Can't help but to sing along with you ;) Thanks for the lyrics. Why didn't you upload this on dlive,dsounds or dtube instead? It might be upvoted by those apps.

dtube is hit and miss for me, I live in the boonies with not great internet. I did not think of dlive or dsound, I have never used them. I will next time! Thanks for the input, and the kind words!

You are welcome @fishyculture. I'm looking forward for your next post. ;)

Wow it's so cool @fishyculture. I don't know if you like singing and playing music.

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Actually I was training to be classical pianist when I was a kid. My hands are too tiny, had to change plans when I quit growing!

You do the best I like it. I want to hear other music of you

You are too sweet!

This is very sweet @fishyculture. I wish I could create music like this :)
Awesome job <3

Thank you very much! Compared to some of the incredible talent here I feel like a hack, so the kind words mean a lot to me!

I know how you feel! I spend hours giving my all to my posts and I still feel they are lesser compared to many things I come across...
But we're trying right?
All we do ♡

Yep! Life and steemit are like baseball, you'll never hit a home run if you don't step up to the plate and swing!

I love this, @fishyculture! You have so many talents...this one is awesome. Thanks for sharing it with us!

You are such a sweetheart, thanks! tip!

Thanks for the tip! Really kind of you!

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