Day 127: 5 Minute Freewrite: Friday-Prompt: sunburn

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Day 127: 5 Minute Freewrite Challenge initiated by @mariannewest. Friday-Prompt: sunburn

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Sunshine was nick-named "Sunny" and her personality lived up to her name. She always greeted you with a warm smile and cheerful words. Her fair skin was not so warm and inviting; she called it "death pasty white." Wearing a hat and long sleeves on a warm sunny day was a must since she was a toddler, and it became second nature to her.

Sunny and her 3 friends drove 4 hours just to go to the beach for the day, but she only wore a bathing suit this time. She was desperate to get a tan, so much so that she didn't use any tanning lotion. Only baby oil for her, as if to say, "Come and get me sun...burn me alive!" And it did just that. She certainly couldn't be in a Coppertone ad, but she would be perfect for a lobster ad. She also had sun poisoning to go along with her sunburn.

In her bathing suit she laid motionless on her bed, refusing to remove it because she couldn't bear the pain. Her salty tears burned her face even more. And her hot and cold chills could only be helped with a white cotton sheet. This was Sunny's life for 8 days. You would think that this incident would have taught her a lesson, but no. This was the beginning of her obsession with obtaining a warm, glowing tan.

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I'm sorry to laugh at the pain. I need to write about the worst sunburn I ever had.

By the way, I'd love to personalize your Over 20 Club badge if you'd like. I just need a picture you'd like me to use. Your profile pic would be perfect.

That is fine with me; I love it when that happens. Yes, I would be very interested to hear your story. : )

OMG! Personalize my badge? Really? I would absolutely love that! My profile pic it is. Thanks so much! : )

Great! Are you on discord? You could send me the pic there.

Oh my. I just joined and I don't know my way around. Can I send the pic to you in one of your old posts?

that'll work.

I sent it to "Overlooking the lake."

interesting...

The defiant - wanting what cannot be!! Thanks for sharing this!

Isn't that the truth! Thanks for reading! : )

Wow, I really like this story! Despite the pain and somehow horrifying (but gripping) ending, I really had to laugh hard at "perfect for a lobster ad"!

Thanks so much! Glad you got a laugh out of this; I love that! : )

HaHa! Thanks for the nutty delivery. : )

She certainly couldn't be in a Coppertone ad, but she would be perfect for a lobster ad

hahahah this cracked me! I love your humour XD

In this ancient martial art temple, the freewrite hombu-dojo, the great soke @mariannewest put me, her sempai, in charge of communicating the powerful moves on which we will train for becoming BBB (bananafish-black-belt):
Martial art technique n. 1, single prompt option
Martial art technique n. 2, three parts freewrite: 1 2 3

(woops seems we overlapped here... well it was a fun read and worth!)

It makes me happy that I gave you a laugh. : )
Your delivery made ME laugh...(bananafish-black-belt.) LOL! : )

Train hard and one day you'll get it!!

Very good, loved the bit about the lobster add, I laughed out loud! :o)

Thanks and I loved that you got a laugh! : )

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