Folco’s Birth – Page 18
Hello everyone, with a new sketchy-scratchy page of our little story !
I almost posted it too early, with the feeling something was wrong, and indeed something was.
The first version of this page's content was drawn way too big, only offering the first box and the city sketch to see.
It's funny to see how my perception is altered when working on a screen compared to paper: I couldn't define what was feeling so wrong until I started to play with the inital page's size, and finally understood what was so obvious.
From a narrative point of view, it was clearly more interesting to reach the point we can see below rather than stopping on the ruined city's picture
It implied a couple of days delay (I'm not currently in a speedy mood :D ), but I know I wouldn't have been satisfied by posting the previous version.
Anyways, here's the thing :)
I wish you a nice day,
See you !
(c)Berien 2018
Posted from my blog with SteemPress : https://berien.com/comics/folcos-birth-page-18/
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Many thanks ! :)
I am sorry for the late comment, Pascal! I was away on holiday but I am back now (and desperately trying to catch up with my feed) !
Lovely page, I do like it, specially that panel with the buildings of the island... It has a labyrinthine feeling to it and a good atmosphere :)
As always, I look forward to the next page <3
No problem Liske, and thanks for the comment ! :)
Myself took a break, mainly from computer related things, these last days, in need for simplicity : pencil, wooden plank and nothing in between :)
Next posts will probably be delayed, but not for too long :)
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