Need your Opinion and Suggestion!

in #art5 years ago (edited)

These are my candle packaging mockup, have been working on the design for quite some time. It is definitely not my strength. I really need feedback from Steemians for these candle packaging design, personally I feel something off but couldn't tell what it is. There are two types of purples mix with white. Initially am thinking to use purple and gold but gold foil is too expensive for me now to print due to the raw printing material, maybe next year only change to gold.

I would like to associate the brand with these words, therefore have choose purple and white. Any suggestion, feedback and opinion about everything are welcome!

  1. Independent
  2. Daring
  3. Rebellious
  4. Bold
  5. Glamorous

Without Joanne Wong candle packaging.

Pandan is the fragrance oil scents which is also the highlight of the entire packaging.

What do you think if there is a JW letter on top of the box?

The reason I put all of the information on the candle packaging is because I want my customer to know about the candle they're buying but at the same time, I feel like it is too much of information. Ah, the dilemma of information.

Would you buy soy candles based on these packaging? Is the packaging attractive?

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  1. Pandan is the first word I see on the packaging. But it is not the brand name. Hence branding wise is not correct in my opinion. It is the flavor. The thing that should capture my attention first is the brand name and a candle shape, image, vector or motive on the side to help me (first time viewer) immediately identify Joanne Wong = candles.

  2. You can use different colours to indicate different scents and/or flavors. Pandan and purple do not go together. Pandan goes with green. Lavender goes with purple. These kind of mismatch of expectations might cost you a lot of attention wasted. So, please do consider them. The goal for a new market entrant is to make it as simple as possible so that u can attract early adopters to give your product or service a try.

I would suggest using a lighter purple colour. Like almost blush. I feel like that's the trend nowadays and will attract girls' attention. Or at least for me 😂

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I like the font in option 1A and I think you need a logo and brand for your product, that's the most important thing. If it's going to be Joanne Wong, then I think it needs a design instead of using standard font, like Cath Kidston or Anya Hindmarch.

If you want the name of the scent to stand out, perhaps you can have that on on the top or opposide side of the box, but a bit smaller than the front

Oh, and not too dark purple, its too heavy

I think I agree with @buzz.lightyear your branding name is not "pandan" right?
You might need a little classier font to showcase your beautifully handmade soap.

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You should make Joanne Wong prominent. That's your brand, yes?

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I have to agree with @buzz.lightyear and @littlenewthings. The word Pandan is not the product. It's the flavor. I can't relate the packaging with candle.

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