痛彻心扉|月旦评

wilhb81 (75)in #cn-reader • 6 years ago

痛彻心扉|月旦评

作者：潘智文

剧烈疼痛
从内心深处
一阵阵传来

难道
我已经要死了？

不对
这种痛
不是心脏撕裂的痛
而是我的心灵
呐喊求救信号

图片来源：Pixabay

她
被我无情的忽视
掩埋在内心深渊

我
冷漠绝情对待她
时常为难折腾她

可是
她
依旧默默守护我
等待我回心转意

我
这一刻蓦然回首
检讨自己的所作所为
真可怜又可恨

顿时
痛彻心扉

希望
时间可以倒流
让我弥补过失
珍惜眼前人

#cn-literature #cn-malaysia #teammalaysia #busy

6 years ago in #cn-reader by wilhb81 (75)

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anthonywong (60) 6 years ago

nice, upvoted

wilhb81 (75) 6 years ago

Thanks bro "D

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mfxqaq (46) 6 years ago

好有才华+1

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wilhb81 (75) 6 years ago

感激啊，时刻都见到你留言 :D

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janicechua (67) 6 years ago

唱一首痛斥心扉

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wilhb81 (75) 6 years ago

张栋梁的《痛彻心扉》吗？

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janicechua (67) 6 years ago

哈林有吗？

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wilhb81 (75) 6 years ago

我不适合唱哈林的歌 XD

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jychbetter (52) 6 years ago

才华+1

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wilhb81 (75) 6 years ago

谢谢啦兄弟 :P

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pizzapai (61) 6 years ago

不能弥补了38哥... 向前奔跑吧！祝你幸福快乐！

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wilhb81 (75) 6 years ago

谢谢38妹的祝福，也祝你天天18岁，日日pokpok脆 XD

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pizzapai (61) 6 years ago

哈哈哈哈哈哈是就好。想永远啵啵脆呢

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abcallen (73) 6 years ago

哇，老铁写的真好啊，支持支持！！！

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wilhb81 (75) 6 years ago

谢谢老铁，期待你的佳作～

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abcallen (73) 6 years ago

老铁，加油，继续你出色的创作，很不错哟！

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wilhb81 (75) 6 years ago

嗯，你也很棒，一起加油吧老铁 :D

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abcallen (73) 6 years ago

好呢好呢老铁

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cnbuddy (-4)(1) 6 years ago

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perlia (54) 6 years ago

哇才子呢～寫得超好喔，厲害👍👍

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wilhb81 (75) 6 years ago

唔敢当，三脚猫功夫 XD

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