Here or There - Ed Privat

in #dsound5 years ago (edited)


Hey !!!

It's still a work in progress I am not happy with the prod especially in the intro , I wanna change the overall sound too, It's always a mission when you can't find the right virtual instrument and when the levels are "meh"
Maybe the drums should be a bit more aggressive too!

I like the structure of the song, still need more work to make it sound bigger

Here or There

Are you warm enough, when the lights are out
Do you need an arm , when the land is white,
watching the snow falling down for the first time
Taking it slow and living the life it's just right
We can get lost in the wild and glide forever
Chorus
All I wanna do is loving you it doesn't matter
If it's here or there
I will follow you yeah through and through
back and forth I 'am breathing your air/I will be your air

We are bound to grow, wherever we're thrown
You won't be alone, you and I we know
That the lessons of life keep us from hitting
the same wall twice
We'll learn how to live and learn to live
where that's right
I don't know what the future holds
we got to choose where we grow old

All I wanna do is loving you it doesn't matter
If it's here or there
I will follow you yeah through and through
back and forth I 'am breathing your air/I will be your air

I remember you from previous lives
I swear we share a love that
never runs out of time
I was out of tune you were the first chord
ever struck, the only song on my mind
All I wanna do is loving you it doesn't matter
If it's here or there
I will follow you yeah through and through



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I knew I had to come by to your profile after I heard you on @spotlight.artist a few weeks ago and I'm glad I have again. Even though you say this is a rough work in progress, it sounds beautiful. You have a great voice and these words are powerful as mate!

Looking forward to hearing the final version which is going to blow our minds away I'm sure :)

Thanks mate, we working on a brand new prod, hopefully it will be up to par!

Another hit one as usual

Thanks so much!!!

welldone my friend
it's really beautiful one!
keep music on!

It’s a beautiful song with deep meaning, I love the lyrics, thanks for sharing with us.

All I wanna do is loving you it doesn't matter
If it's here or there
I will follow you yeah through and through..

I’ll tell that to my wife!

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Lol ! Thanks, keep on telling her every day!

It's a beautiful song already - but with a little bit more work on it, I'm sure it will be a great catchy tune ...I love the chorus. .... You've got such a great songwriting skill <3

That's such nice compliment, indeed the next part is so important because it will determine if the song is ready to become something more...

A nice 'Easy Listening' tune. Maybe amplification of percussion for a 'bigger' sound, as you mentioned, might bring it out to your liking? Vocal background might sound better with female voices??? I like it anyway.

Ciao

Yeah a bigger sound, a bigger bass maybe? Additional sounds too, I am too sure exactly what though... A woman voice is a great idea too!

The underlying melody reminds me of 'Sade' for some reason...? Maybe it's the mellow tone.

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