Inmortal (poema) - Audio

in #dsound5 years ago (edited)


Si pudiera cambiar el tiempo;
abrir mi alma y obsequiártela por completo,
no estuviera merodeando lo que hoy es leyenda.

Vivo amando el recuerdo de tu esencia.
La única que todavía no me abandona,
la que suelo sentir en mis días más sombríos.

No es lo mismo contemplar el cielo en tu mirada y sentirse ángel;
que ver el cielo desde una jaula y sentirse prisionero del tiempo.

Has de saber de mis días tristes,
de mi sufrir, de mis ciclos grises.
De la nostalgia que me embarga
en las solitarias horas de mi existencia.

Dejas moribundo lo que soy.
Marcas imborrables en mi piel.

No es lo mismo contemplar el cielo en tu mirada y sentirse ángel;
que ver el cielo desde una jaula y sentirse prisionero del tiempo.


Mil gracias al amigo @mariusfebruary por permitirme usar tan hermosa armonía cuya autoria es de Andrew York , y pueden escuchar por completo el audio del amigo @mariusfebruary Aquí


Andrew York plays Home

A bordo de la nave
me despido, mi querida familia steemiana.
❤LOS QUIERO❤




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Very beautiful poem. I am proud to have contributed to this voice + music composition :-)

I'm glad you liked it... I will continue writing and if I bump into another of your beautiful themes, you know, it serves me as a companion hahaha... A big hug my friend xD

I have shared my recording (and yours) with Andrew York. He enjoyed listening to them. His manager asked me to make sure he is mentioned as the composer and author of the music in the post and he would further appreciate a link to his discography: http://andrewyork.net/Discography/Discography.php Perhaps you can edit the post accordingly. Thank you, my friend.

Sorry I'm late answering, buddy. The light situation in my country is getting worse every day. I understand what you're saying and of course I'll edit the post giving credit to the author... A thousand apologies for the inconvenience

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Waaa que hermoso, siempre haces un excelente trabajo. Felicidades sigue así :3 ya te sale naturalito jajaja

Abrazos bro.

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Aww, provoca dedicarla. Gracias por inspirar tanta cosa buena:)

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¡Guaao. Quedó genial :)!

La melodía del amigo @mariusfebruary hace que suene muy bien loquita... Te mando un lindo y fuerte abrazo XD

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