Dusk ( Metal song in a hurry )

Hello folks of Dsound and Steemit ! This is a tune which i recorded a couple of years ago with my band ( actually this is just a demo version ) for a certain competition . Namely , my friend sent me a link to a battle of the bands kind of event , and told me that the deadline for submission was that evening at midnight ( he told me that at around 8 o'clock ) and that tunes didn't need to be professionally recorded , some demo tracks would be just fine . At the time , we were a cover band and didn't really have any songs of ours , so i needed to act quick :D I starting playing the guitar in hope of coming up with something worth presenting to a wider audience , and voila - the whole song just burst out of me in half an hour . It was recorded a bit sloppy for my taste , but i had to submit the song in a couple of hours and we would play it live anyways on the competition . The day after we have submitted the song , a representative of the competition told us that only songs with vocals in it are valid for entry ( i wish i knew that when i went into trouble of putting the song together ) and that we can't enter competition . What a bummer ... So this song has been hiding in the corner a couple of years now , but i always thought that it has a potential to grow into a great song . Untill then , hope you'll enjoy it now for what it is :)