World of technology

in #esteem5 years ago

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Presently in the world today,people are cherishing technology more than manual,this world is driving at a technology world,those who are not educated about technology mostly computer are the one who will be left out of this technology world,they won't be considered as part of the society.
In all areas of our lives,technology has taken most part of it,it's not our fault,it's simply because it makes our work easier bland this what's making people to be enjoying technology and this is one of the benefits of technology.
AREAS OF TECHNOLOGY SPECIALIZATIONS

  • IN CONSTRUCTION : Many engineers are experiencing a better turn around of things in their job now a days,instead of manual labour they now have different machines in their aids,to the extent that they don't have any stress anymore just to control the machine and the machine will respond in return,what a wonderful world we are living,only those who are not educated are left out of the enjoyment of this new world.
  • IN EDUCATION : In education today,they have experienced a landmark since the invention of some technology that makes teaching easier,both teacher and students are happy for the convinence in education,because it makes teaching easy and it also makes understanding easy,technology world us the best.
  • IN PRODUCTION ACTIVITY : Producers/manufacturers are enjoying now a days because of their job that had been made easier through technology,producer don't need to make use manual labour anymore because of presence of machine which is through introduction of technology.
  • IN MEDICAL FIELD : Through technology many lives had been saved,before the invention of machines who serves as live savers,many people are dead while many diseases are incurable but now with the presence of technology nothing is impossible.
  • IN OUR BUSINESS : Our various business had been easy,there is nothing impossible again since the invention of technology,it brought about online buying and selling,easy advertisements,booking goods online and so on
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  • IN OUR DAILY LIVES ACTIVITY : Technology has been in use mostly in our daily activities,examples of such is our home appliances such as ceiling or standing fan or air condition for receiving cool and fresh air,electric cooker or hot plate for cooking at home,home heater for making our house warm when feeling cold and so on
    If you agree with me that technology world is the best,signifies by upvoting this post and follow me @amonolu,thanks.
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This is an arguable article. Yes technology has made the world so much easier and so much nicer... However it has also brought about a lot of harm and damage to us. Take for example people committing suicide out of depression because they have been comparing themselves to others on Instagram, not knowing that not all they see there is real and sustainable. Or take for example the millions of people who lose their jobs daily because some super machinery has been created that can do the job of 10 people... So much trouble. So really, it depends on what angle one is looking from.

Nice article though. You need to correct a few typos and make some of your sentences shorter. You should also add examples to your subheadings, just like you did for the last one.

Cheers

Many thanks,I'll make corrections next time.

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