Chip & Rick - Fifty words story contest

in #fiftywords6 years ago

Chip and Rick   

„Chip, wake up!“
„Rick, I'm awake already.“
„Oh, you are? I still can't see very well. How long are we closed in here?“
„Too long if you ask me. Shall we?"
„Ok, give me your legs, and on three we'll push together.“
Craaaaack… And first chicken siblings have been hatched.  

This is my entry to the fiftywords contest of @jayna.
https://steemit.com/challenge/@jayna/fifty-word-round-up-and-new-prompt

Image source: https://www.pexels.com/photo/native-egg-beside-white-feather-on-brown-tree-log-162720/

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What an interesting concept, especially for a fifty word story. You ought to expand upon the chicken twins/siblings plotline.

This is such an original idea, and the dialogue is so entertaining.. congrats!

And most importantly, it fitted inside 50words :)
Thank you for the compliments my friend!

Yes, it doesn't feel stretched at all 👍

The siblings have such distinct voices. I totally have an image in my head of what they're like. Great.

Nice teamwork, little chicks! There's some truth in this, regarding twins. From birth they are in tune with one another. Mine (boy and girl) are now 16 and in a teen angst phase. Hopefully it will pass and they will be friends again!

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