Chicken Chocolate (a 5o-Word Story for @jayna)
Chicken Chocolate (a 5o-Word Story for @jayna)
Greetings, 50-worders and readers. This is my entry to @jayna's #fiftywords challenge. This week’s prompt is
“Chocolate
.” You can see the details of the challenge here: https://steemit.com/challenge/@jayna/fifty-wordshortstorychallengehighlightsandnewprompt-io8swh9f5v
Grandma White always brought treats only for Jessy.
Andrea had to chase her across the patio, fighting off the chickens.
Once, as Andrea ran after her sister, she saw a piece of chocolate on the ground.
She grabbed it quickly; swallowed it triumphantly.
Jessy looked at her chocolate.
Nothing missing.
Commentary: shit happens! :)
Chocoguate de Gallina (una historia en 5o palabras)
La abuela Blanca siempre le traía merienda solo a Jessy.
Andrea tenía que perseguirla por el patio, quitándose las gallinas de encima.
Una vez, mientras Andrea perseguía a su hermana (tratando de convencerla que compartiera su merienda), vio un pedazo de chocolate en la tierra.
Lo recogió rápidamente; lo tragó triunfante.
Jessy miró su chocolate.
Estaba completo.
Thanks for your reading. Looking forward to your comments.
I'm simply speechless. 🙂
Poor kid. This is why grandparents should be carefully monitored when they are around the children. They tend to favour one of them despite the others candor.
Perhaps Andrea should have shared the chocolate she found with her "loving" grandma. 😂
Hahahaha, That is such a great idea. Yes, grandparents can do a lot of harm to children's upbringing. Thansk for stopping by @roxy-cat. It's always a pleasure. Have a great Sunday.
Have a great Sunday, @hlezama. 🙂
Poor Andrea. But... maybe she didn't notice the difference if she has never been allowed to have chocolate. What a mean grandma!
Yep. Very mean indeed. Parental and grandparental love is not always as generous as it is supposed to be, in the same way not all priests are saints and not all siblings share.
I tried to capture the inveterate naivete that is not always redeemed or recompensed.
Tasty piece of shitcolate! Yum-yum!
Hahaha. There you go, i was looking for the pun word and did not think of that.
Thanks for visiting.
Haha! Oh no! That's hilarious.😂
:) Tell that to poor Andrea. Thanks for your visit. Glad that story made you laugh.
La avaricia ciega. Muy buen texto con clara moraleja, @hlezama
Gracias por comentar, @gracielaavecedo. El egoísmo y ciertos juicios de valor puede llevar a extremos inimaginables y deja sabores muy amargos.
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