A bank heist

in #fiftywords • 6 years ago (edited)

‘Twas just a bank heist,
some little fun was had,
but the porkies heckled us.

‘Twas just a bank heist,
our guns did the speaking
and the civilians ate dirt.

‘Twas just a bank heist,
the vault had allured us
and the treasure really begged:

“Free us from this cell!”


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     6 years ago 

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     6 years ago 

    And now the bank robbers are also saying "Free us from this cell!" :-)

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       6 years ago 

      Haha yes! Lest of course they are the PayDay crew and skiddadle away with the loot.

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         6 years ago 

        Entertaining and full of emotion. Love it, IronFelix! Especially the last line. Now that's a different perspective.

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           6 years ago 

          Thank you so much for the compliments!
          Anywho, I had a lot of fun and time thinking how to end this piece off. I’m glad I went with this ending.

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