Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #42!

in #finishthestory5 years ago (edited)

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A contest with a pot of 10 STEEM + 4 @steembasicincome shares? You're in the right place!

198 @steembasicincome shares awarded till now, plus 22.558 SBD and 73 STEEM, through the contest in 41 weeks!


What's being pulled out of the Bananafish magic hat this time?

1st place: n. 5 STEEM

2nd place: n. 3 STEEM

3rd place: n. 2 STEEM

popular vote: n. 2 steembasicincome share (remember to vote your favorite!)

Best comment to the stories: n. 2 steembasicincome shares

Welcome you all, wild creatures of our fiction prairies! I don't know if this return should be called triumphant, as in @calluna's last week prophecy, but indeed it's felt like that for me. Suffice it to say that I still carry the marks left on my skin by the evil purple squirrel's medieval (and sadomasochist) practices. Thankfully I managed to escape from her "cares" right when she was to the point of selling me in a deranged auction... between bananafish members! This is almost cannibalism!

Wait a moment... what's that bananafishious banner up there? Could that dude, who's playing the drum, be Tio Billy from the renowned Tortillas de Pelo punk-rock band?? But of course, the new contest "Quest in the Realms" is taking shape! Sharpen your pens, beloved potassium appreciators, since something never seen on Steemit is coming this month for you right from the K-deity creative mind. The Quest in the Realms will reward a brave adventurer with a 30 STEEM PRIZE. It's an original format that will throw you in a multiple endings story and - at the same time - in a treasure hunt among the Realms. All the Bananafish Knights are scribbling like sloths under LSD to deliver you a unique and rewarding experience with more than 50 episodes and 10 different endings. Stay tuned!

Back to today's story, we continue our tradition of picking from the best writers of this contest. Today we are pleased to host a beautiful story by @gaby-crb who, through her effective yet discrete style, immerses us in a scene with a unique touch of magical realism. Thank you Gaby for gifting us this gem!

Good luck, brave storytellers, let the dance of creation begin!


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  • Tell a friend about the contest!

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  • Vote, vote, vote your favorite story in the comments!

  • Use the #finishthestory tag.

  • Try to post your story the earliest possible and not at the last moment (or after the results! argh!)

  • Respect the dreadful 500 words limit! o_0

  • Help our contest & workshop to grow by giving it some visibility.

    And now.. let's dive into the story!

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Kayla

by @gaby-crb

Kayla’s boots hit the ground. The dry earth scattered into dust clouds as she strode across the front of the house. Manny was late again.

The harsh sun beat down against her brown skin. She looked off into the distance, the heat haze sat above the plain, rippling the sight of the far off mountains.

She lifted her arm, checking her watch. The sun reflected across the scratched screen. She ran her finger over the deepest scratch. It had still worked after her accident.

A young boy came hurtling out of the front door and blindly ran straight into her. The force knocked them both to the ground.

She fell hard. Her limbs scraped against loose stones and the scorched dirt.

“What in the devil are you playing at?”

She got up quickly, patting herself off in the process.

The young boy sat still. Tears rolling down his dirty cheeks. He coughed as he struggled to breathe, the fine dust getting into his lungs.

Manny stepped onto the veranda and placed his hands on his hips. His shirt hung open and his hat tilted on his head.

Kayla shook her head at the sight of him. She had known Manny her entire life but she was always surprised to see him so relaxed at his home.

“This your boy Manny?”

“Aye, that be Thomas.”

“He make yer’ late then?”

Manny walked down the front steps and helped his son up. Thomas took the offered hand reluctantly.

Kayla chuckled to herself.

“Better bring him with us. ‘Bout time he learned the family trade.”

Manny and Thomas followed Kalya towards her truck. The truck smelled of licorice and sawdust. The engine rattled into life. Thomas slid into the centre. His eyes still pooling with tears.

Manny opened up a hip flask, taking a sip. He growled as the harsh liquid hit his throat. He passed it to Kayla, she drank as she drove across the open land.

“What them tears about then?”

She asked as she passed the flask back.

Manny laughed. “He got a clip round the ear for talking cheek to his mother, didn’t ya’ boy?”

Kayla gripped the wheel tighter as the truck bounced over the rough terrain.

“Well, that seems rightly deserved then. Ya’ don’t talk like that to your ma kid, ya’ just don’t.”

The truck swayed as the tires followed the grooves and tracks of the land. Thomas was the most affected by the force, having spent very little time in vehicles of any kind. He watched as the truck traveled through a river, unaffected by the water.

Manny lit up a cigarette and tilted his head back as he exhaled. The smoke filled the air quickly, Thomas started coughing.

“Quit it will ya manny. The kid got weak lungs or summit’?”

“He’s a weaklin’ alright.”

Manny laughed as he clapped his son on the back.


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Let’s grow together!


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With delegations, @bananafish VP will grow and consequently, the upvotes given to every contest entry will be higher. @f3nix, @gwilberiol, @dirge, @tristancarax, @theironfelix, @raj808, @brisby, @maverickinvictus, @cyemela, @marcoriccardi, @calluna, @oivas, @anixio, @ntowl are the names of the proud Bananafish Knights who already delegated a fraction of their SP to this project.

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Join the fun! Here is how this contest works:


  • An unfinished fiction story or a script is posted.

  • You finish it with your own post or a comment in the comment section. A limit of 500 words is recommended.

  • WIN 10 STEEM + 4 @steembasicincome shares to the writers with the best endings and comments.

The result will be out on Wednesday - January 16th, 14:00 PM GMT+7 avg. (U.S. West Coast time zone). Submission deadline: Tuesday - January 15th, 14:00 PM GMT+7 (U.S. West Coast time zone). You may vote your favorite story till the results are out!

A special thank to @gwilberiol, @dirge, @tristancarax, @theironfelix, @raj808, @brisby, @maverickinvictus, @cyemela, @marcoriccardi, @calluna, @oivas, @anixio, @ntowl for their precious delegations, making this project a reality!
If you like this contest..SPREAD THE GOSPEL! We're grateful for your resteeming and word of mouth. Everything helps to grow together!



GOOD LUCK, BRAVE STORYTELLERS!



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So sorry for my last minute styleee with this one but I have an entry if I'm not too late. It is very close to the word limit, hopefully this will make up for my tardiness ;-)

https://steemit.com/fiction/@raj808/a-sacred-crop-short-story-finish-the-story-contest-week-42

I saw a horror tag down there.. Yumm..

Vote here your favorite story!

My vote is for @felt.buzz, whose writing skills are crispy and smooth at the same time. I'm very happy he entered the contest, I used to read a lot of his stories when i joined Steemit over a year ago, and he's definetly one of the Steemians I toke as models to improve my limping English.

My highly valued opinion is casted for @vasigo for the highly improbable runner and the fun I had with it.

I am going to vote for the story by @calluna it was a fun read for sure.

okay, I am really torn this week. So that said, I want to cast a main vote for @cyemela - the trade, and the exchange between Kayla and Thomas were just brilliant, but then, if no one else votes the same, and you need a decider, secondary votes for @dirge and @gwilberiol but there were so many fantastic ones in there!

Mój vote goes for mój Crickuna~ (@calluna).
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If a little one comes, I want him/her to be called like the deity.

Well of course but my dearest little Ashley has important witch training to finish and all kinds of perils to accomplish first

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My vote goes to Raj for this round.

Hello there! I also gave it (and Manny) a stab.

Ooh who knew Kayla could be so evil. I like the revenge arch this set up for Thomas.

Noo poor Manny, what you did to him! Welcome back @gwilberiol!

Yo! Cyemela in da house 🤘

Enjoyed the prompt. Admit it took a while to figure out a "family trade". LOL

But, when you did, it was one of a kind!

Totally original!

Here be me entry for this contest here.

Here's mine

Welcome, Dr. Dirgelius!

I can't wait to see what is coming next. This week was fun here is my entry a little late but I had a busy Saturday.

https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@stever82/my-entry-into-the-finish-the-story-contest-week-42

Next, we have a story by a certain Phoenicius. Who's this? Nice to see you here, Steven!

I really wish I had gone a different way seeing the others, but the great god has already had so many wonderful offerings already this week - already very well sated

https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@calluna/kayla-finish-the-story-entry

Insatiable is the deity's second name 😑

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