Try a Game in The Hall

tristancarax (66)in #finishthestory • 5 years ago (edited)

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5 years ago in #finishthestory by tristancarax (66)

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f3nix (59) 5 years ago

What you did Tristan is memorable. Thanks for helping @salvao overtaking this language barrier. I know how It feels too but there's nothing to be worried. We're all here to have fun together and we know that non-mother tongue steemians have their life a bit harder.
A fatalist scene with a bitter-ironic ending. I liked it because it widened the initial narrow perspective. Keep it up, guys!

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cyemela (63) 5 years ago

So cool. Glad you guys did this. The more we learn here the better. Have to say the ending was unexpected. Good one.

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tristancarax (66) 5 years ago

Thanks. It was an interesting challenge to work with his writing style and from what was given.

I was having some trouble figuring out the ending. I wasn't sure I was going to go with that until the dreamy phase became more clear to me. I'm glad to hear that you didn't expect it to end as it did.

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