5-minute Freewrite: Prompt- Paper

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Looking at the number on crumpled paper, she sighed. It was the post-election week so the government clinic was filled with sick people, expecting mothers, toddlers sprinting and screaming babies. There were more than a hundred in the queue, with all the appointments being postponed. Yes, it was going to be a long day. She was grateful for the husband who took the day off to accompany her to the clinic for the baby's vaccination. His presence made her feel less lonely.

"Ma'am, I will need to refer you to the doctor. It seems like your baby's growth is lagging behind. All measurements are going downhill except for his head circumference."

"Did you hear that, boy? You have a big brain! All that milk must have gone to your head! Hah!" trying so hard to cheer herself up and put on a straight face as the nurse filled up the referral.

Don't worry, it's gonna be okay. He's healthy, isn't he? Look at how happy he is, he's well fed and fast asleep. He's alright.

They entered the room only to be greeted by a doctor smiling behind a surgical mask. The husband was left waiting outside while attending to their firstborn.

"Good afternoon, ma'am. Here, have a seat. Let's talk about the baby. Is he well fed? How frequent is his feed? Is he latching well? How about your diet? How are you doing? What does your daily meal look like? How's your water intake? Are you currently working? How are you dealing with work? Stressful?

She stared at her sleeping baby and all the unending questions faded into the background.

Tired.

"I'm alright. He latches on demand. Yea it's been a struggle having to juggle between attending to the little ones and managing work, but we're slowly coping."

The doctor saw the hesitation in her eyes, her deepened eye bags spoke louder than words.

"You don't have to keep things to yourself, you know. You can talk to me. If need be, my team and I are more than happy to offer assistance in any way possible. I know it must not be easy for you since you are taking care of your little ones alone most parts of the day." her voice softened.

She nodded thankfully, trying to hold back the tears in her eyes.

"Alright, he seems to be growing well despite the unfavorable measurements, let's give it some time and monitor further. If nothing improves by the next appointment we shall advise further."

"Thank you."

She breathed a sigh of relief as they exited the doctor's room.

She looked at the little boy who was sleeping soundly in her arms. He let out a little smile, so as to tell her that everything was going to be alright.

She smiled back.

Yes, everything is going to be alright.


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My second girl was well she still is underweight and small in size... Nurses always asked me to feed her more... But she has been eating and she is still small in size... Nurses even suggested me to feed her more butter and cheese... 😅

Tell me about it. The boy's weight gained less than 1kg since a month ago and he's now 3mo. You should see the look on the nurse's face. She sounded so concerned it made me wanna cry 😔

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I swear I was at the clinic, waiting for the doctors report too... Perfectly engrossing!

Thanks @whitelite, glad you enjoyed the story :) see you around!

Everything is going to be indeed alright. Thank you for sharing this wonderful 5 minutes write up with us. Oh he definitely has a big brain :)

Thanks for dropping by, @kyrios. Glad you enjoyed the story :)

I will have to deal with all these clinics soon, I am not looking forward to getting my son vaccinated as I hate getting needles and I'm aware of what is coming lol.

Lol yea I feel you! The screaming was definitely predictable. Xx

Yes. Everything is going to be alright Mama. I look at him and I know. Smile... But I know that feeling. because Jansen is definitely 100% failure to thrive as of now. So we sure have some mama's feeling right there. But I also believe everything will be alright.

And hey his brain is growing. :)

Yes, hugs to you and Jansen. Both babies jiayou, we both jiayou too, mama! He's been having mild fever since he got back from the clinic yesterday, been clinging onto me needing lots of comfort.

Hahaha @alimamastory you always manage to come up with great write ups! Love your freewrites!

Thanks @khimgoh, you're too kind :) xx

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