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You are a very talented writer and have put together a really heartbreaking story full of pain and emotions. You have also managed to capture the love involved on both sides which is hard to do. So well done on such a quality piece of writing.

Oh, this is so emotional. I almost cried. You are a really good writer.

Thank you. I'm glad I've still got the power to evoke emotions!

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Great good tugging at the emotional strings. Good writer, you should be rolling in stacks of cash.

This was a sad story @byn. When I read the story, I felt the hopeless of sarah. Although she sense something not right, but she always motivated herself by painting some happy moment. But sad enough, the truth always drop by until the last breath of her which she knew that it no more hope. The only thing she could do was sleep peacefully beside her mother until the time come.

You have express the emotion well in a short story of yours, i love it very much. You always write this type of story? The storyline goes so well.

Very moving story. Hart to finish, but it was faithful to the premise. It remined me of Andersen's Girl with matches and London's to Build a Fire.
There is no possible alternative ending for stories like those. We see those outcomes once in a while on the news. I remember this story of a father who left mother and daughter in the car that broke down in frigid weather and went out for help.
As a matter of fact, for me it is a real miracel that this does not happen more often given the amount of people living and venturing in cold and isolated areas.
Our world is more hostile than we want it to be and we more fragile than we think. Our life here sometimes looks like "brief reprieves" (to use @d-pend's words).

Heartbreaking, but beautifully told @byn!

This is such a heartbreaking story. I know it's a fiction but I am sure that similar situations happen in real life too.

You were able to bring emotions and desperation with your writing. You have a gift of making the reader part of your story. Very well done!

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