Vase | 5-minute Freewrite
He was looking at the beautifully designed vase when once again his mind drifted to the happy joyful scene he and his wife had...
Rose: Let you know first, if my time is up and I go home first, I want cremation not burial.
Jack: Wah, isn't this too early to talk about?
Rose: not at all... We never know...
Jack: Ahhh... Okay, I see.. We are not scared of death eh..
Rose: not at all... It is not death, it is going to eternal home..
Jack: Got it. Me, same. I want to return to ash too. From ash we were formed, to ash we return.
Rose: and I want to be in this particular rosy vase, not those dull urn, okay?
Jack: me? You get me some vase with Jack the Sparrow picture then..
Rose: don't be silly...
Both giggled and laughed...
"Dear Rose, you are deeply missed by me. So end up, you really leave me first. Or I should say you return to Home earlier than me. You have died a noble death. To save all your children at school during the massive gun shot. I could not be more proud of you. I miss you...and you know what, I shall prepare a vase of the picture Jack the Sparrow by myself then," said Jack while looking at the vase.
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Thanks for the resteem @iamjadeline <3 <3 wanted to let you know before I go to bed! This will probably show up on your post because partiko messaging isnt fully done yet xD HI EVERYONE BY THE WAY lol!!
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Must resteem.. :) ❤️ you did a super great job eventhough you are new. I am impressed.
Oh yes, I started Steemit with writing and blogging. Only recently joining dtube, exploring and improving. Still alot to learn and I know I will have lots to learn from you one day.
Keep it up😊 have a good sweet sleep.
It's really not that hard :> if you ever want any tips on editing I'm learning a lot of stuff as I go, I can always share with you the latest tricks and snips I've gotten down with my editing software! You got me on discord, just hit me up anytime <3 I dont know much about steemit, but when it comes to weird software I'm alright xD
And I will! Thank you so much for your kind words.
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Thank you so much for making yourself available. You are helpful and kind. You will go far here. Continue to keep your vibes up!!! :)
Should I need any advice on editing, I will hit you up :)
Yes, please do, and of course! Thank you so much for the uplifting words to me, I am hoping you are right and I can find a way to give back in turn :>
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Woah woah! Do you use partiko? I noticed that your other message came as a message through chat and I am wondering if the chat system finally works!!!
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I don't use partiko. Just usual commenting from steemit.com 😊
Also I love that you are I to creative writing too :D this was really cute and sweet!
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Thank you @shadzadeh, and anything on Steemit that you need help, you can hit me up. :)
Thanks so much @iamjadeline <3 hope you are doing great today by the way!
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Hi meet again @iamjadeline I want to comment about your writing
The words you make are very romantic when I read them until I am touched.
It's like the story of Romeo and Juliet.
I want to follow you can you follow me cute woman😘
Thank you @qira for your kind words and nice to meet you😊