Herb and Stella's Story

in #freewrite5 years ago (edited)



The Setting:

Night.
A Park.
A winding path.

The Mood:

Light fog.
Soft light radiating from the moon-shaped lamppost.
Quiet.

The Music:

El Choclo (Tango) - Eduardo Rojas - Piano on Fire

The Characters:

Stella and Herb.
Married couple.
Elderly.
Small, yet statuesque.
In Love.

The Costumes:

Herb:
Overcoat: Charcoal plaid double-breasted
Suit: Silver Overchecked Two-piece Wool Suit in grey.
Shirt: Black long sleeve turtleneck.

Stella:
Overcoat: Black, Satin-Lapel, Double-Breasted long coat.
Dress: Grey long sleeve side-split wool-blend long dress.
Neck: Blush/Black Double-sided Leopard Velvet Scarf.
Belt: White, Felted Silk shawl with black and white flowers.

The Scene:

Quiet. The time of night when all creatures sleep. A soft covering of fog slowly descended over the park. Lights, meant to show the way, transformed into shinning moons, whose glow was contained in the small atmosphere of the fogs making.

Time had no meaning as the couple walked hand in hand down the winding path. Soft shuffling of footsteps echoed in the fog. They walked as one. Years of love was seen in the gentle care Herb took to make sure Stella's hand was safely, firmly, in the crook of his arm.

To the right of the winding path, a clearing in the woods shown itself. Herb leads Stella into the center. Gently taking her hand from the crook of his arm, he laced their fingers together. She quietly lifted her face while wrapping one arm around his back.

Never taking their love filled eyes off each other, both smiled gently knowing what was to come.

One note from a piano was all it took. The couples spines became rigid. Stela's bare feet automatically arched as she waited to be lead through the most memorable dance they had ever achieved while on stage.

The music grew in the clearing. The couple showed their love of life in the sexy tango meant for only the two of them. They had given their lives to the stage. Their talent was something never to be achieved by any other. Now it was their time. Time for just the two lovers to enjoy all they had worked for.

To dance solely for themselves. To renew the love they have for each other in the best way they knew how.



~Dance~



This story was written based on @Mariannewest's Day 626: 5 Minute Freewrite

Prompt: The Sexy Tango

This story was written in more than 5 minutes.

Thank you @Mariannewest for always being here and never giving up!



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I wanted more! Lol nice job

Thank You!! I did too but thought it was best to leave them dancing
Hope all is going well with you!!

wow, i really enjoyed this one. you really know how to set the mood. You made the reading come alive and engage me. OMG I freaking love this! i played the music and it was like your story , the words came off the page and started to decode themselves in a sexy tango to my brain! (could be the cannabis but i haven't smoked nearly enough!) ABSOLUTELY MARVELOUS! wow, so sharing to my Facebook and twitter. I loved it <3

THANK YOU!!!

I am SO happy to hear you listened to the music too!! I thought it went really well together but you never know how others will hear it.

THANK YOU for letting me know that it worked how I was hoping it would. HUGS

Another good one, have you noticed that in todays world, the Lady holding a Gentlemans crook of the arm, has vanished?
As a kid,on friday night (before the shops opened on the weekend) , all the husbands and wives, (95%+ were married then as well) would stroll up and down the street shopping together and meeting friends.
The only time the Ladies would change the position of their hands was when the gents arm was straight down, holding their purchases.
Then the hand would be on the inside of the elbow, between the chest and the arm.
How things change.

I have and feel very saddened by it all.
I believe women should have 'rights' but I love being a woman too and walking like that is special. I think it brings you closer than just holding hands. So many good things like that are being lost. :(

THANK YOU!! I AM so happy you liked the story. I have been trying to write more. I didn't like the feeling of being so 'rusty' a few days ago when I wrote that first story in a long time.

I figure you will always be honest and let me know if I start getting really bad :D It's good to have honest friends! :D

Dance, for themselves, for their love, for themselves!
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@snook love the story and how you explain the enviroment. And adding those details was great. Thanks for sharing on #pypt

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just beautiful!! i think you've found a new style here - i loved how you laid it out with the setting and outfits and music... ohhhhhh so nice ! :)

i could feel every little bit of this story/play

and i think you left it off exactly where it needed to be - lets us use our imagination for more!!!

thank you for sharing on #pypt

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Now I've....had the time of my life, and I owe it all to yyyoooooouuuuuuuuu! Totally felt the Dirty dancing soundtrack as they shared their last dance!!

You had me snorting while laughing in#PYPT thanks for the good laugh <3

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This is such a beautiful story!

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Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of writing on PYPT! 🤗

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