Day 291: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: helpless

in #freewrite6 years ago

HELPLESS in STEEMIT

Hello, my dear fellow @steemians! How are you today? I just wanted to share the actual footage of my beloved #mama crying again during the transfer of the bones of our #papa to his new #home.

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Photo taken :08/05/2018 10:25H Kantubaon Cemetery, Tabuelan, Cebu, Philippines.

HELPLESS

Originally composed by:

@starzy

When #papa died
My mom keeps crying and cannot hide
Until no more tears came out
This decided us, to bury papa and keep her out


I felt #helpless with what happened
No words that came out of our mouth and complain
Only hug and comfort her
To let her feel that we are always there


After 22 years she saw the #papa's bone
She cannot stop herself again
But now the stronger #mama faces the truth
That #papa always lives in everyone's heart


Transferring to another place
Makes #mama at peace
That he lives now in comfort
Which all of us are in good breathe


My #helpless mama understands
The purpose of God behind
She keeps on praying to live longer
In the service of her sons and daughters



SettingValue
Camera PhoneHUAWEI P20 Lite
Focal Length27mm
Model numberANE-LX2J
ISO50
Shutter1/295s

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Thank you and God bless!


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Sincerely yours,


@starzy

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Moving, heartbreaking, yet hopeful - well done!
Interesting, the contrast between the wife in your story and the one in my story! I was thinking of a newspaper item on a wife whose husband dumped her for a trophy mistress, and the wife KILLED him, "accidentally" in an alleged struggle in the kitchen. He was a very well respected pediatrician. Who cheated on his loyal wife, mother of their three children....

Thanks @carolkean for appreciating and God bless

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