The Martital Dance

in #freewrite5 years ago (edited)

Her dance is slow and graceful. The young woman sways rhythmically before the bright bonfire in front of a hushed crowd of observers. Her large oval shaped eyes are closed. Rich dark lashes fan her flushed cheeks as the music swells in unison to the steps of her small feet moving silently across smooth earth.

He notices the beads encircling her shapely neck. The flames lick them with a glowing light. Were they moving on their own, he wonders? The night wind is subtle, blowing her thin dress in folds along her tan limbs.

Three men stand in the shadows, leaning against a stand of trees which whisper above their heads. Each man wears garments carefully decorated with bright embroidery. Soft leather conforms to the muscular legs of each. They hold weapons of war in the crook of their arms. Each man's face is unreadable. One man will leave with the mesmerizing dancer, the victor of both Princess and the new ruler of a people.

The Princess's dying father sits immobile, off to himself. He sits just in the shadows of the fire, his hands slowly stroking the tribal drum handed down from his father, and his father's father before him.

At last the music crescendos and the dancer's feet slow in the dirt. Her hands raise high and her face tilts to the sky. Flames burst before the crowd sending sprays of bright embers into the night air.

The Princess's movements cease and the crowd is silent, as though holding their collective breath. Her dark eyes slowly open, facing the three warriors. Her full lips are parted. She levels her face on the warrior farthest to the left and her hand raises as though pulled by a string. She points to the warrior with long, black braids. Her hand lowers to her side and her voice raises into a haunting song of her people. The warrior steps into the circle of light and walks confidently past the seated tribe. Before her, he lowers on one knee and takes her small hand to his and completes the age old song in a rich deep voice.

The old man raises his hands from the drum, its final note ringing in the night and his eyes close slowly as his head dips to his chest and heaves heavily in one last guttural breath.

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Interesting ritual. A life ends, new lives begin, a smooth transition and neat way to treat the idea of the beads.
We are all part of this sort of necklace. We dance to the rythm that is played to us, but we can also create our own.

Thank you for your kind comment. I love your review of the story's meaning.

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Your description of the scene is so perfect that the reader can almost feel the heat of the flames.
I particularly like the image of the father who breathes his last breath at exactly the moment the baton passes from him.

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Thank you @deirdyweirdy. The beauty of freewrite comes through as this story played out like a movie reel.🤗

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Thanks for giving me an extra 5 minutes of work on how to incorporate a line from your story into my freewrite 😂

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Haha my pleasure, I think? @jeanlucsr

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Yes. It's a compliment 😂. Probably will upload it later tonight. I'll make sure to give you a tag 👍

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Looking forward to it! Have a wonderful night.

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Wjat an intense start it is to the dance creating quite an entry, feels somewhat like a therapy.

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Thank you for your kind comment and sharing your impressions.

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As they say, dancing is a way for one to forget all the hells he goes through. I really love every single word in there. The flow of the write up was lovely.Great work done and keep the writing spirit up

Thank you for your thoughts and yes, dancing has always been a passion for me.

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You are welcome and yes dancing is always a great tune for the soul

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Hi there @wandrnrose7!

What an interesting story. At thr beginning i was already hooked up especially you narrated it clearly. I like how outlined the story.

Congrats and keep on inspiring us with your stories.

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Oh no worries dear its okay.. im just glad i stumbled in your post today. It was a lovely read this morning while i was sipping down my chocolate drink..

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You're very kind. 🤗❤

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And you are awesome!!!

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Awww thank you. You brought a big smile to my face @maqemali!

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So nicely described :)

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