Day-690-Freewrite Tuesday Screeching Tires

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Below is my five minute #freewrite on today's prompt: screeching tires

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Three shots were fired, then screeching tires, some lady was dead in her bed.
The shooter was crazy, his target was lazy, smoking his doobie all hazy.
If only he'd checked that Summer Road was not a Drive, that poor lady might still be alive.
The banger went looking, but Paco was lurking, behind the white Chevy Caprice.
He turned down the street, his heater was sleek, but Paco was waiting for action.
He scoped out his target, poor Leroy was quiet, one shot to the head, and then he was dead.
No red roses for Roy!

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What a cool write up. Congratulations on receiving your favorite card! Have a great day

I feel an indescribable feeling reading the post..
A bit too gruesome for me.
How will the next prompt inspire you, I wonder

This post has received a 3.13 % upvote from @drotto thanks to: @sbi-booster.

Hi Bruni! Too much death for me but I like the rhyming.

Resident cat here, wishing you a good day. Here is today's new prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-692-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-poverty

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The concept was true, some guy shot up the wrong house but thankfully she was only grazed @whatisnew

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Thanks for clearing that up for me Bruni. I feel better now. : )
I can't imagine being a victim involved with mistaken identity, especially in today's world.

I love this one 😍. It has all it needs, to be liked by many. Today's poetry. It has rhythm, goes fast, there is humor in it and life (once or now) presented all in one.

I wish you a great day with live 👍💕

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