Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #5

in #haikucontest6 years ago

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Image source: @marcoriccardi

Hammock on a line
A tree house open and free
Yet my heart still roams

Entry for the Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #5

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This post was submitted for curation by: @theironfelix
This post was given a rating of: 0.7273176053480428
This post was voted: 57.83%

I had the same feeling of longing when I saw this--the empty hammock and empty tree house evoked those feelings. But I couldn't capture it--you did. Nice.
I will vote later when I am replenished.

😎!

Glad you had the same thought. For me, it was the only thing that came into my mind

Blessings

Such a lovely post, a requiem for a time that had come before - yet fails to be enacted now. Oh, so personified each item was - a certain nostalgic cartoon could be made. Upvot’d and resteemd’d.
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Thanks for your awesome comment @theironfelix

Blessings

That’s a lovely haiku :)

Thank you @gaby-crb
Blessings

Thank you for your participation! The sweet nostalgia for the past time pervades your haiku, like many of Master Bashō.

Good shot. Fun read.

There's beauty and longing in your piece! Very nicely done!

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