Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition # 39

in #haikucontest5 years ago (edited)

Greetings and much love to all.
We are facing another haiku exercise proposed by @bananafish based on the photo. On this occasion, @marcoriccardi delights us with a photographic take that, although it lends itself to many interpretations, I was impressed by the calm that leads to a serene mental state produced by the fascination that the sea exerts and its inexorable horizon in the soul human.
If you are excited about the idea of ​​participating in this interesting poetic exercise, you are welcome and the bases can be found here


“It is hard to believe that the ocean, moved by the wind during a storm, can return to a state of serenity.”


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[photo by @marcoriccardi]



This is my haiku:

meek waves

swim on my shore,

i'm serene



Este es mi haiku:

olas mansas

nadan en mi orilla,

estoy serena



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By Zeleira Cordero @zeleiracordero.

02/10/2019

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Simplemente Gracias

For your kind reading, simply THANK YOU




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The musicality of your haiku gives me the tranquility you wanted to express

It is good that you have captured the energy that generated in me the contemplation of that harmonic image so well captured in the shot, the musicality is a product of the ensemble. Thanks for stopping by, @bananafish.

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Look at that, a haiku closing in on $2! I want to add to my comment on @bananafish that I like the use of "I", in lower case to diminish the ego of it. Really like this one. Did you compose it first in English or Spanish? I can't read the Spanish.

Hi, haikus companion! I am very grateful with your visit. I think it's great that you have grasped the intention of the "me" lowered. I write in Spanish which is my mother tongue and then I translate.

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