Good Love

in #life6 years ago (edited)

She use to be so strong until he broke her
He thought he had won but he was just a blind loser
She fell from the top and hit the ground, he felt he had demoted her
She loved but he oppressed
She strove but he did only what he wanted
Then he left and felt it was over.
Yes, it was over , for him ,not for her, because he made her stronger
And made himself a better lover.
Reliving his life all over again
While she repents out of his vanity into clarity.
As fate brought her price for standing strong in the face of retaliation.

This is a fictional poetry that truly describes what happens when we stand to do right in every relationship even when it seems defensive to do otherwise.

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Love is the answer to all positive things.... I'm actually commenting for the first time... great post @ogoowinner

This is lovely and the message is clear.

Nice one.... love is always the best thing that can happen to anyone

lovely write @ogoowinner
this is moutivition thank you for sharing
beg respect from africa in morocco born in ifran
I love you africa
resteemid

This poetry swims deep

there are things in life that happen and what although they hurt and we do not understand at the moment, these are the best things that can happen. They are things that later make you stronger and more mature. They are things that make you grow.

In a good relationship both parties should be under the rule of God then you can get the harmony for both of you.

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