Monomad : My trip to Trying Monochoromes Beside The Montain | Belajar Monochrome Sampai Ke Gunung Segala [Bilingual]

in #monomad5 years ago (edited)

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Hello guys, how are you today?

Today I want to tell you about my experience of practicing monochrome. The world of photography is increasingly interesting to learn, although not many theories that I know, learning from practice is sometimes more fun and can immediately know the advantages and disadvantages.

To learn to take @monochrome just around you, pay attention to some objects that you can make an object. Cheap and fast. But not with me today, because my goal is to find something unique and I must spend 2 hours get the place where I learned to practice monochrome. No half-hearted, I studied on the mountain. Too much expressive, but it's okay. I also don't have many sentences today as an introduction to this writing.

In the next photos, that I will show below, there are several compositions that I want to be in a photo including stalls, ravines, islands below and height of the place. Well, here I have taken a few photos, I guess there are about 15 photos, but I chose 8 for me based on the 4 criteria above.

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[This is my entry for #monomad challenge.]

You see the first photo, I think that's what I deserve to be the cover in this article. I took that photo after I failed for many times because didn't suit my wishes. How about you guys, please tell me your opinion? But before you tell about your opinion, I must give you a comparison, right? Okay, I'll show you some other monochrome photos. And feel free to comment one by one or general.

The second photo, IMG_8089

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In this photo, it looks like interesting but I feel this photo is not perfect because, on the right side too white or over bright, I want the island to be clearly visible, but I failed to give it.

The third photo, IMG_8090

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In this photo almost same as the previous photo, for some reason I still feeling dissatisfaction, I don't know why is this because I give too much zoom in this photo ? or is it too bright on that right side?

Fourth photo, IMG_8091

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This photo is almost in accordance with my wishes, not too bright and the island behind it seems to be suitable for me, but there is one part that is lacking, the stalls display is too little. I think I need to move little to the left and display it so that there are many stalls.

The fifth photo, IMG_8092

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In this photo, I actually fulfilled the criteria in the previous photo, I zoomed and the stalls were clearly visible, but this seemed like I was not at the top, if the composition of the colors and appearance I thought was ok.

The Sixth photo, IMG_8099

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In this part of the photo I see the shortcomings still the same as the previous photo, it doesn't look like on a mountain and the visibility of the island behind is very little.

The Seventh photo, IMG_8101

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I'm still not really satisfied with the results, even though the location of the stalls is very fitting because it is in the middle, but it seems less touching on the side below.

The Photo Eighth, IMG_8102

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In this photo, I shift a little to the right, with the aim that the composition is better, and I like it but it doesn't seem too good.

Which one you like ?

For Honorable mention : @curie, @jznsamuel @levycore @aiqabrago @khanza.aulia @for91days @theycallmedan @slowwalker @hvr @altooq @cityofstars @anomadsoul @ocd @acidyo @ocdb @blocktrades @goldenproject @chorock @turkishcrew

Regards

@khaimi.

All Pictures taken original by me, using my Canon EOS 800D, Location : Lamno, Aceh, Indonesia

Bahasa Indonesia

Hello guys, apa kabar hari ini ?

Hari ini aku ingin menceritakan pengalamanku mempraktekkan @monochrome. Dunia fotografi semakin menarik untuk dipelajari, meski tidak banyak teori yang aku ketahui namun belajar dari praktek terkadang lebih asyik dan bisa langsung mengetahui kelebihan dan kekurangannya.

Untuk belajar mengambil @monochrome sebenarnya cukup di sekitarmu saja, perhatikan beberapa benda yang bisa kamu jadikan objek. Murah dan cepat. Tapi tidak denganku hari ini, karena tujuanku adalah mencari sesuatu yang unik dan aku menghabiskan waktu 2 jam mencapai tempat aku belajar praktek monochorome. Tidak tanggung-tanggung, aku belajar di atas gunung. Terlalu berlebihan rasanya, tapi tak apa-apa. Aku juga tidak punya banyak kalimat hari ini sebagai pengantar tulisan ini.

Pada foto-foto yang akan kutampilkan di bawah ini, ada beberapa komposisi yang aku inginkan berada dalam sebuah foto antara lain warung-warung, jurang, pulau di bawah serta ketinggian. Nah, disini aku sudah mengambil beberapa foto, aku perkirakan ada sekitar 15 foto, namun aku memilih 8 saja untuk aku nilai berdasarkan 4 kriteria di atas.

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[This is my entry for #monomad challenge.]

Kamu lihat foto pertama, menurutku itulah yang pantas aku jadikan cover dalam tulisan ini. Foto itu aku ambil setelah mengalami beberapa percobaan yang gagal karena tidak sesuai keinginanku. Bagaimana menurutmu ? tapi untuk menilai kamu harus punya perbandingan bukan ? Baik, aku akan memperlihatkan beberapa foto monochrome lainnya. Dan feel free to coment one by one or general.

Foto kedua, IMG_8089

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Pada foto ini, sepertinya terlihat menarik namun aku merasa foto ini kurang sempurna karena di bagian kanannya terlalu putih atau terlalu terang, aku ingin pulau disana juga terlihat jelas, tapi aku gagal memberikannya.

Foto ketiga, IMG_8090

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Pada foto ini hampir sama dengan foto sebelumnya, entah mengapa perasaan tidak puas masih ada, apakah ini karena aku terlalu memberikan zoom pada foto ini atau karena terlalu terang pada bagian kanan itu.

Foto keempat, IMG_8091

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Foto ini hampir sesuai dengan keinginanku, tidak terlalu terang dan pulau dibelakang itu sepertinya sudah cocok menurutku, tapi ada satu bagian yang kurang yaitu tampilan warung-warung itu terlalu sedikit. Menurutku aku perlu bergeser sedikit ke kiri dan menampilkannya agar terlihat banyak warung.

Foto kelima, IMG_8092

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Pada foto ini, sebenarnya sudah memenuhi kriteria pada foto sebelumnya, aku melakukan zoom dan warung-warung itu sudah terlihat jelas, tapi ini terkesan seperti tidak berada di puncak, kalau komposisi warna dan tampilan aku rasa sudah ok.

Foto keenam, IMG_8099

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Pada bagian foto ini aku melihat kekurangannya masih sama seperti foto sebelumnya, tidak terlihat seperti di atas gunung dan pulau di belakang itu sedikit sekali terlihat.

Foto ketujuh, IMG_8101

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Aku masih belum puas sebenarnya dengan hasilnya, meski letak warung-warung itu sudah sangat pas karena berada di tengah, namun terkesan kurang sentuhan pada sisi jurangnya di bawahnya.

Foto Kedelapan, IMG_8102

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Pada foto ini aku menggeser sedikit ke kanan, dengan tujuan agar komposisinya lebih baik, dan aku suka tapi sepertinya belum terlalu baik.

Terimakasih dan salam hangat

@khaimi.

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ya by practicing taking photos you could earn some money with that :)

Yus... agree with you. LOL

expensive trip for ear money not skip. hehehe 😍 😍 😍 😍

I think your choice for the cover is about the best, but it all depends on your settings. Have a look at my "Plane and moon" post of today.
The planes are much closer than the moon so I had a choice to make. Focus on the one for clarity, or the other.

If you want both, then you have to settle for the best that you can get to feature both!

I hope that this makes sense to you my friend and good luck in the Monomad challenge!

Blessings!

Saya menyukai foto ke enam.. saya menemukan sesuatu didalamnya :D

waduh apaan tuh bang ?? jadi ngeri-ngeri sedap ni

hehe yang pasti tidak ada cinderela didalamnya bang. Ya mata saya langsung tertuju ke foto no 6 tersebut.

Saya kira ada penampakan bang, jadi ngeri lewat situ malam2. Soalnya saya ni kelelawar dikit, malam udep, siang non aktif.

Great skills and details.

Thanks @harmonyval. I am just amateur growing to pro, maybe. Hehe

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wow beautiful monomad photographs @khaimi
All the best for contest..

Thanks my friend. Just try and error, more try and more clever. Hehe

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I think composition and light play a huge art in any photo whether color or MOno, but perhaps even more critical in MOno, that and textures play a larger role in MOno, I think If I had to pick my favorite two it would be first and last photos

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