Steemit Open Mic week 84 - LOVEFLOWER - an original song by Bennett Italia

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)

Loveflower


Drones are circling overhead
As we walk hand in hand through the garden of wonder
The garden of course is long since dead
What we walk's the concrete it has been buried under

So I ask the nightmare might you be bought off with a scream or two
If fear is only love that has yet to be met with love
Then let this love flower let these kisses be sweet
And let us love each other for a little while at least
For flowers turn to green fruit
And green fruit to ripe
Then they fall to the ground with the little seeds inside

Cold makes smoke out of our breath
Threading yet another maze of glass and steel and plastic
Microcosms you and I
Teeming with life safe within each slick synthetic packet

So I ask the nightmare might you be bought off with a scream or two
If fear is only love that has yet to be met with love
Then let this love flower let these kisses be sweet
And let us love each other for a little while at least
For flowers turn to green fruit
And green fruit to ripe
Then they fall to the ground with the little seeds inside

All the little seeds


©2018 Bennett Italia All Rights Reserved

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exito bennet

Blown away by the lyrics and the way they work so well with the melody. You play it and sing it so well. Let's see an album one day!

Thanks for a good song.

Loving the lyrics on this one, Bennett:)

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Tasty tune with excellent poetry. Love it bennettitalia!

How beautiful, @bennettitalia. You write so pretty. Greetings. Sorry that I wasn't by your blog for a while, but I've been going trough a little too much jaja Xo!

Oh thank you Siomara! I miss hearing you sing, will have to check out your latest - along with @theturtleproject and @wethepatsies... man, I've had a lot going on lately too :D

Really? I guess that's good jajajaja When I don't have chances enough to also check Open-Mics and stuff, it usually is more good than bad jajaja Bad is for example when the reason is too much work and your work isn't music jaja So... Then we'll watch us later. Greetings!

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