Steemit Open Mic Week # 119 // Sendas del Pasado (Original Song).
Hello Everyone!
I was noodling around my guitar and this song came for a visit, this is a song I wrote maybe a year ago but left in ''the vault'' since I really did not feel it was a full song. I performed this one already for the Open Mic family and forgot about it but for some reason today I kind of felt more connected to it and I just decided to work around it a bit more , ironically this ended up in me simplifying the song more than from the original version as it really feels more like a poem that just happens to have some music around it. Who knows , maybe i'll record this one in the future , it's one of those songs that evolve very slowly :) .
Anyways , I hope you like it!
Sendas del Pasado - Original Song
(P.Mena)
Un corazón cansado
Tiempo que se invierte
Disuelve mi présente
Se pierde , Se esconde
Un dia mas.
Almas que se unen
Que viajan en un túnel
Velos que se mueven
Despiden al que quieren
Se pierde, Se esconde
Un dia mas.
La senda
del que vino ayer
Las horas
la forman
Y lo vuelvo a ver
Deja tu ser
Lava tu piel
Al saber que
Juntos venimos
Y nos iremos también.
Here's a translation:
Roads from the past.
(P.Mena)
Roads from the past
a tired heart
Time that reverts
Dissolves my present
It gets lost and hides
one more day
Souls that unite
travel in a tunnel
veils that move
they say goodbye to the loved ones
They get lost and hide
one more day
The trail
of the one who came yesterday
The hours form it
and I see him again.
Leave your self
Wash your skin
By knowing
We all came together
and we will leave together too.
Temazo....
Gracias Beto!
Me encanta la paz de tu canto, como siempre. Besos y abrazos, cochinituuu @pechichemena!
Gracias Wilins querido! un gran abrazo para ti!
Llena de armonía el ambiente tu canto. Bendecido eres con este don tan hermoso de hacer música y transmitir tanto a través de ella. Un enorme abrazo querido Pechiche😘
Muchas gracias querida @yrmaleza :) ! esas palabras me alegran el día. Te mando un gran abrazo a ti también!
Maano como siempre destacandose !!. Feliz año nuevo y exitos. Por aca otro voto para apoyarte!.
Muchas gracias de vuelta mano! Un feliz año para ti también! Un gran abrazo!
Saludos amigo @pechichemena tremendo tema, uno de mis favoritos. Feliz Año. aqui te dejo un Cover a Steemian #coverasteemian espero le hagas reesteem https://steemit.com/coverasteemian/@beto14/cover-a-steemian-cover-full-circle-spanish-version-circulo-completo-passion-ground-by-beto14
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