Steemit Openmic Week 88- "Barely There" Original Tune
And Now Back To Your Regularly Scheduled Programing...
I think (or maybe hope) that everyone goes through this realization to some extent or another. Part of the journey of self awakening is becoming aware of whats going on inside your own head and seeing how much of it is total bullshit.
Sounds a bit harsh but for many of us, most of our thoughts and emotions are just conditioned responses. Until we begin to really pay attention to where they come from and why and start to see through the programming we are pretty much robots.
This song is a little look at some of the scenery along my personal journey through that process.
Edit...
A friendly stranger on facebook gave me some tips on eq and whatnot and I feel like it really made a huge difference in the clarity of this track so I've added the "remixed" version above the old one. Makes an interesting comparison.
New Version
Old Version
My eyes saw beauty everywhere
My mind was barely there
My lips and toungue were running away
My lungs were pumping air
Did you notice the expression on my face
I was there but my mind was in a race
Always blindly chasing the shadows
Moving pictures hypnotize
And colonize the mind
I'll never look too deeply inside
For fear of what I'd find
Did you notice the expression on my face
I'm still here but my mind has been erased
To the soul the eyes are the windows
But please don't look inside me
I don't know what you will see
Anyway the glass is so damn dirty
I've got to clean them desperately
What I'm looking through
Distorts my view
But if I let the light inside
There would be no place left to hide
ooo
My eyes saw beauty everywhere...
Thanks for Listening :)
Here is some more music I've posted recently.
https://dlive.io/video/shookriya/db01a9a0-68c7-11e8-8c69-9334a80daafd
https://dlive.io/video/shookriya/02ea90b0-6758-11e8-b440-7b6997b9f3d1
Awesome song! 100% upvote from me. I really liked the vibe and authenticity. It seemed really honest to me and was musically pure (not overly complicated)! Just what I was in the mood for right now!
Thank you very much. Honesty is a quality I definitely strive for in my music. It can be a difficult thing too :) On the way there I've got to be honest with myself which is a constant work in progress.
Really well done. Your song made me smile. 💖
Thank you katrina-ariel. That is an excellent effect to have :)
Hi shookriya,
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Awesome! Thank you for your support and for the work you folks do :)
wow!
you are rocking awesome music! I feel your music deeply... cannot wait to have a album of yours, and play over and over again, everyday it feels different, everyday a discover something new in the lyrics and sounds..♡♡♡ keep going @shookriya ... love light and blessings XXX
You can have the signed first copy. But you know I'll be playing for you live all the time soon :) Finally...
cannot wait to reunite... your my favourite every every ever...♡♡♡
Very cool, Shook! The clarity is def crisper in the remix... Great performance and production, man!
Thanks man :) So much to learn.
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Very interesting and unique. I like it a lot. 😎
Thank you my friend.
WONDERFULL you music :3
Thank you Jesus :)