One Day ( MY Attempt At Making A Poem )

in #poem6 years ago (edited)

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One day while nature is on her daily course Man at the appointed time his heart stop beating
Shall sigh and heave and stay motionless
Off to the other side he went to stand before the alter of Judgment
Many a man dread this moment because of our life balance sheet
But some boldly confront it because they have Jesus Christ
Oh how i pray to be like them
Help me Lord Jesus.

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