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FROZEN BEAUTY ICE PRINCESS

@flysky · 20 hours ago

Exactly you are reading my mind , mighty sailor had plan all along and he left beacon so he knows how to navigate to ice heart...now sailor knows the weak and strong points of her ice kingdom...
The real question is ....who can give me best answer on this question?

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Is it an epic, a long poem about a great person or national hero?

Is poem epic!

Is it a lyric, a short, musical verse?

Any music with it!

Is it a narrative, a poem that tells a story?

is it !

Is it a haiku, an intense, lyrical four-line verse of seventeen syllables?

well you tell!
Is it confessional? For example, does it examine personal memories and experiences?

HOW TO ANALYZE A POEM

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Read the poem all the way through at least twice. Read it aloud. Listen to it. Poetry is related to inner music rhythm, so the sound imagined is important. You listen to your favourite CDs many times; the principle is the same. It takes time to fully appreciate and understand a work of art. Make a note of your first impressions or immediate responses, both positive and negative. You may change your mind about the poem later, but these first ideas are worth recording.

Young voyager on wings of love

https://steemit.com/exploration/@flysky/young-voyager-on-wings-of-love

Frozen Ocean of heart

https://steemit.com/poem/@flysky/frozen-ocean-of-heart

Frozen beauty of ice queen

https://steemit.com/poem/@flysky/frozen-beauty-of-ice-queen

frozen legends are true

https://steemit.com/poem/@flysky/frozen-legends-are-true

Frozen kingdom gates open

https://steemit.com/poem/@flysky/frozen-kingdom-gates-open

COMMENTS SO FAR FROM FOLLOWERS:

anaiscarolina03

· 15 hours ago
My question is ... if she can freeze ships and destroy strong hearts. Why do she let him go for free? Because he is different?

@ths

· 21 hours ago
Don't you think how ironic is freeze people, emotions, and feelings?
Because, obviously you will neutralize what you freeze, but do you realiza how fragile is the ice? Once something get freeze need to be more careful, cause can broke it in any moment.
Cheers my good friend!

@anaiscarolina03

· 15 hours ago
You're right, friend! But it also depends on the thickness of the ice and how long it has been frozen, so it can break. An iceberg will never break. On the other hand, a frozen sea can have very thin ice capable of being broken by carelessness. Maybe his heart is that fragile. But what would the sailor find after breaking it?

@flysky · 20 hours ago
Exactelly you are reading my mind , mighty sailor had plan all along and he left beacon so he knows how to navigate to ice heart...now sailor knows the weak and strong points of her ice kingdom...
The real question is ....who can give me best answer on this question?

@ths

· 20 hours ago
he thougth that had the control, poor man...

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flysky · 18 hours ago
He will try to rescue her ice heart even she is mighty princess

@mghufroncholid31

· 20 hours ago
this poem is a narrative and historical genre, ...s because the most important is how the idea is conveyed well. I was happy with the new activity of flysky in writing poetry. continue my best friend!

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@flysky · 19 hours ago
Mind awakens like r 2 d2 near luke when force is present
Force within that moves planet

@mghufroncholid31

· 2 days ago
Saya seakan menemukan filosofi hidup yang hendak disajikan @flysky, puisi ini sepintas berlatar sejarah namun ketika dicermati secara mendalam nyatanya berkisah bagaimana kita mesti memperlakukan kehidupan.
Memiliki pertahanan kokoh dalam membentengi diri dan tak mudah dikoyak persepsi barangkali hal semacam ini yang hendak disampaikan @flysky lewat puisi yang ditulisnyavkali ini

@flysky · yesterday
I seem to find the philosophy of life that would be presented @ flysky, this poem is at a glance history but when examined deeply in fact tells how we should treat life. Having a strong defense in fortifying and not easily torn perception perhaps this kind of thing that would be submitted @ flysky through poetry written thisvkali

adeniyi
· 2 days ago
Even though i have never seen snow, i totally understand the concept of this poetic creativity. Nice one my friend! Keep the ink flowing

flysky · 2 days ago
What if I run out of the paper
I hope i never will

@adeniyi

· yesterday
Even if you run out of paper, you can never run out of your intellectual property!

itsmechille

· 2 days ago
The frozen beauty, been frozen in time.
With eyes so cold but the heart is warm
When sailor came from a faraway glance
The frozen heart has melted in fire.
Im not a poet but i just tried.
I hope you dont mind
Thank you for sharing your poetic mind sir @flysky
In poetry we cultivate imagery, this is one great example of your creativity.
Enjoy your day sir @flysky

@adrianav

· 2 days ago
Wow! I am delighted with this narrative, I am captivated, I am intrigued and I fall in love .. what writing talent you have, I congratulate you

@carloshernandez

· 2 days ago
It's like a story but on the ice. but it has something of romance and good love so I understood it sr @flysky interesting

@smart-shaegxy

· 2 days ago
Hmmmm.... This is nice and refreshing, thanks for this post @flysky

@adeniyi

· yesterday
Even if you run out of paper, you can never run out of your intellectual property!

questions are :

*1. Does sailor wants to go back to win her frozen heart ?
2. Does she needs to be rescued?
3. Maybe he needs to save his own soul?
4. Maybe he need to save his broken old soul find newself?
5. Why do she let him go for free? Because he is different?
6. do they believe in legends of each other?
7. Will he go back to fight for her ice frozen heart and navigate back risking everything ?

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1- yes im a sailor who want to go back to win her froze nheart.
2- No, and yes. you will never know if you do not go.
3- yes is own soul his whit her love. so he need save his own soul
4- Theres no newself. only your self. but he dont know who he is.
5- She let him go because she wants him to come back for her. no he is not different, he is a soulmate.
6 - i dont know what to beliveve, maybe.
7- I would do it, of course, only the road is never straight

that is more details
Exactelly you are reading my mind , mighty sailor had plan all along and he left beacon so he knows how to navigate to ice heart...now sailor knows the weak and strong points of her ice kingdom...
The real question is ....who can give me best answer on this question?

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