Frozen beauty of ice queen
Poem by @flysky
Ice dome kingdom...
Ice kingdom and its ball room shines
Frozen seats and icy treats for all
Is it cold and forbiden to know
Will ice queen join the dance on ice
Mighty sailor from frozen ship now
With heart of warm wide ocean size
Dares to ice plains of bestranged kingdom
Enjoying the charm of frozen beauty
Beneath the crystals of ice lights tower
Ice ring is open for first icy dance with skates
Ice queen enters the festival risking all
That warm ocean can maybe melt ice dome...
Image source "Lace Up Your Skates: The World's
www.huffingtonpost.ca"
Is it an original? It's definitely good but it could be longer. Keep it up @flysky
Will continue
This story is ongoing for sometime if you have time to see ones before
I eagerly await the continuation of this series Frozen beauty of ice queen.
Intelligence that never made the ibarant Beauty ice queen frozen
A nice view @flysky
Intelligence that never functioned like the beauty of a frozen queen of ice, it becomes an important thing for us to know how the ablution is functioned with the best.
A living challenge is the part that must be passed by the rays of sunlight that will melt the ice that is frozen.
The Strong Tower is built together to illuminate the life of mankind
Steemschools Light The invader who brings beauty charm
WOOW It Amazing
You are very spiritual man
You are specially honest man
World is yet to be surprised by you and your
making
Your understanding and seeing all are miracle
Living amongst us and for us discover
I enjoy getting to know you by day and your dedication to steem schools and your family
I know you have good heart, sharp eye and mind to express it
Thank you
Icy kingdom and icy surroundings, icy all around, ice shops with icy guards came crumbling down to the icy bridge and Queen comes skating in, but her icy heart can crumble down! All is icy and frozen, will just melt away, when the warm hearted King will bring to thee!
Or he will freeze like his sailing ship
hey @flysky Frozen beauty of ice queen amazing poem.
Thank you , finding it with deeper meaning and maybe reader can see it many ways , either beauty frozen is ok or acceptable
Beautiful prose and good lexicon, I like the way you use metaphor and symbolism.
It has to expressed with rough edges due to nature of intro and story development
Nice one poet @flysky 👍👍
Always as unique as we should be
Distinctive
Challenging
But you beat the challenge!
it turns out you can make beautiful poems
I enjoy to participate in this community
Dear sir @flysky the Frozen beauty of Ice Queen is a good title of the poem which is lovely and full of feelings and emotions, love to read with love best wishes sir.
Thank you
Glad you can see it through and feel the energy.
And happy you are here
Her heart seems to be frozen, but that's what makes her beautiful.. she's waiting for her mighty sailor to dance in her arms on the ice and be forever in the width of the ocean! Beautiful poem! Love it. Please, continue with the story (:
ice crown is established long in her past and it is nice that all supporters see the value of the poem
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