Voyage within voyage,dream

in #poem6 years ago (edited)

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Mighty sailor had a dream of deep secret
Days are lining up with grey lines
He has grown roots in his own dome
Where is this shiny way of stars taking him

Petals of dream stars are sprinkled around
His kingdom has grown sleepy now
Broken chains of sweet memory
Past is now future and present

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Great piece @flysky. Am in awe the way poets play with words.

It's a bit short @flysky. It okay but it doesn't really 'speak'. I look forward to an improvement next time

past an experience for future preparation. stars adorn the sky. at the time of the evening.
Thanks Sir

Beautiful think! interesting combination of coffee and roses, I loved it! Thank you for sharing Sir.

Great to read these lines, in my opinion dreams are integral part of our life, because i think sometimes it really reflects the truth of our life and sometimes dreams showcase Unimaginable scenes like paradise which makes our memory so filled with beauty essence. Thanks for sharing this poetry with us. 🙂

outstanding writing...
Mighty sailor had a dream of deep secret
Days are lining up with grey lines
He has grown roots in his own dome
Where is this shiny way of stars taking him

Star bright, start light
Little star shines so bright
Sailor man still has a doubt
Will the little star brake his mind

Sugar spice and everything nice
Come sailor man in my iceland
Brake it slowly brake it gently
Drop all your weary

Horizon is curvy but colorful as rainbow
No drama only lava
Roses are red and so as cherries
Little stars shadow is depth

Will the mighty sailor follow the stars to the Ἀσία?

Excellent poet sir @flysky. Thank you for sharing.

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