Valley of silence
When the valley of silence
rips away our peace and tranquility
Deep inside you are silent
You write the suffering of the litany
A litany to live,
which I do not want
what I want from life.
The weld of our unity is creaking.
Where is the sense of closeness.
Our silent world was quiet
and the valley shared with us.
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Excellent poem dear it refreshes me up :D
Are saying, contestant should write any poem but only use the tag?
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Here is my entry
https://steemit.com/poemchallenge/@prechyrukky/poem-challlenge-with-margaretwise-29c94ccadd393
Hi @margaretwise this is my first entry into your excellent poetry comp... @josediccus tagged me in to participate so I thought I'd hit ya with my best shot for my first attempt. I've made a short dtube film/poetry reading. I hope you enjoy :)
https://steemit.com/dtube/@raj808/lmxd5i1m
Beautiful poem! The photo is very gorgeous! It looks very quiet and peaceful atmosphere indeed.
Besides, the trees are wonderful. I especially love the reflection of sunlight on the clouds behind those trees, really magnificent. Great shot! ;)
Hello @margaretwise, thank you for sharing this creative work! We just stopped by to say that you've been upvoted by the @creativecrypto magazine. The Creative Crypto is all about art on the blockchain and learning from creatives like you. Looking forward to crossing paths again soon. Steem on!