My poetry -A latter came floating into the air

Some clouds some rains
A latter came floating into the air,
Then i was searching of a cricket ,
But I had to wait for the night
A kite was flying in the blue sky.

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The songs of cricket sounds queer
The sparrow talking about the liberty
The sun wants to take rest forever,
I never feel the mind of a girl,
It may be something wrong.

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