Heart in Hand (original poetry)

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     6 years ago (edited)

    Yeah...boyyyyyyyy...You've got skills!

    my hearts

    Edit: my heart's

    I let her go

    Beware...not to be a stalker...but love's a funny creature...sometimes the person who can't trust you is the one who you should prove your trustworthiness to. It's a fine line between a broken person not wanting to be broken further; and, another, who just wants to know someone will stand with them even in their brokenness.

    It's a heart matter...Sometimes letting go means, giving a person the space they need while always being truthful for how you feel when they 'come back into the picture'.

    Love is complicated and often confounding; but, the gut (Holy Spirit) never lies. People enter and exit our lives for Divine Reasons...always to make us more aware...thus better for what's right and wrong about our own perceptions...IOW...love grows us up to the reality, that oftentimes love looks nothing like love (spring days walking on sunshine) at all.

    Peace.

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     6 years ago 

    I was trying to decide if heart's was possessive or not. Who knows, language is all so subjective anyway. :)

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       6 years ago (edited)

      hearts...more than one (plural)

      my heart's (think of the apostrophe as showing ownership)...

      It read so fluid I didn't want the interruption...lol...

      Best regards.

      Peace.

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         6 years ago 

        Nooooooo, I don’t want her to go! Nice rhyme scheme. What inspired this poem or should I ask for the story behind who?

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           6 years ago 

          You an ask whatever you like, but I really don't explain poetry. It just is.

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             6 years ago 

            This killed it for me.

            The living are usually the hardest to grieve.

            So much punchlines in one piece

            Amazing.
            I duff my hat

            This touched my heart

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               6 years ago 

              Why thank you, I'm a fan of your work as well. :)

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                 6 years ago (edited)

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                Your poetry just has its way with me. All the feels. A work of heart 💙 Officially my favorite poet of all time. Of all time-stace-continuum.

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                   6 years ago 

                  These feelers touch souls. Nice pun! 😂

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                   6 years ago 

                  Thanks! It was pun to say! 😂 You make my soul swole, Clay bone 🤗

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