Hear Kind Things

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

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Who are you to give advice? You survived the same amount of time as I.
Actin like your life’s the right guide to abide by.
Nice try, nice guy!
Like the time I listened before right? Remember how that night went? Spent six on cement floors with no visitors, you didn’t record one minute.
The hell I didn’t, that’s nonsense.
You got my back?! Is that what you call it?
Ridiculous. Fact is I’m sick of listening to this.
Tell me something I haven’t heard, I deserve words that sound different.
Gifted is different, you think it’s a figment? Like it doesn’t exist? Forget it.
Did you forget I’m over it? Discussing this with you again is pointless.
I’ve heard it before, turn your back and ignore me, just to come back and I see more poor me.
Same story!
See, that’s what I came here for! I deserve more of that confidence with less consequences.
It’s best we acknowledge both of them with consciousness.
You’re hiding from something, what is it?
Fearful of the lack of acceptance? Check it, your next step is this:
Put your game face on, be prepared, ready for every moment.
Be alert, stay aware, know you are your own worst critic.
And most critical fan, regardless of what you fear, I’ll stop right here.
We’ll talk later, make me disappear.
I dried my face and took a deep breath, I turned the lights off and said:
“Thanks! It’s nice to hear you say kind things these days, Mirror!”


Hear Kind Things

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I keep coming back to this one, dude; artistic, intrinsic. This is probably the 4th read-through. Really dope, refreshing and inordinately relative. More, Please.
Peace and Blessings!

Man that’s awesome! Hey thanks a lot my friend. I’m glad you appreciate it, this one was tough to post.

It's neat that you can articulate the internal battle so well, even to the extent of explaining its hard to share. That's the good stuff, vulnerable, blood-inked, confrontation in introspection. Much love, my dude.

Love this!
Never stop my friend👍

Deal!
edit Hey, thanks for the Resteem, you’re awesome!

Slammed!! Really deep and really awesome. Love it!!!

Ahhh yes!! Man that makes me feel good, I’m telling you brother this one made me pretty nervous.

As I would copy lines from my notepad and paste them here, as I got closer to the end I would get a little more nervous. I sure am glad you liked it! Thanks a lot @jlsplatts.

This is so good! I love when you put stuff like this out. Slam poetry, because you are dope. Muah

Thank you so much, you’re gorgeous! Have I told you I’m your biggest fan? Muah!

I also have a brutally honest mirror. We used to be friends but it's really let me down lately. I find that ignoring it works well.

As with all reflections, they are merely a display of the past (speed of light and all that), so what we see in the mirror is how we appeared a split second ago.

I'm already better than that.

Agreed! And now you’re even better than that. Thanks a lot for stopping by!

Dear Artzonian, thanks for using the #ArtzOne hashtag. Your work is valuable to the @ArtzOne community. Quote of the week: Art, freedom and creativity will change society faster than politics. -Victor Pinchuk

Thank you @artzone! My pleasure.

nice things, this is amazing

Hey, hey! Long time no see. I sure am glad you like it @chaitanya.mhatre, I miss seeing you around here. Happy Friday to you sir! Thanks a lot for stopping by.

Mirrors have never been my thing, but if I were to pull off that trick that this man is doing with his cup, I would have mirrors all around.

You wrote exactly how I feel with these image reflecting magnets. Why must it be so??? :(

You just made my day. I’m not sure what it is about you miss @foxyspirit but there’s a common interest or ‘something.’ How that conclusion is formed after just a few typed up sentences is beyond me but...

That’s awesome you can relate! Thank you so much for dropping a line, I appreciate it. I was telling my wife, when I copied this post from my notepad to the computer, as I got closer to the end I got more nervous about posting it. “Maybe I shouldn’t.. maybe I should... shouldn’t.”
-followin ya @foxy!

Good thing you did! Otherwise we would have missed out on a great write up. See what happens when you jump in ;)

There is a something for sure! I think it's cool that people can connect without a certain je ne c'est quoi to have happened. Past lives, common grounds, who knows! Cool eh :D

Thank you for the follow ;)

Im not good in english but I like it 👍

Thank you @greenleaves, I really appreciate you stopping by. I’m sorry I didn’t vote you 100%, that was an accident.

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