Love Rain

in #poetry6 years ago
  • You showed me a fire in your eyes, you left me memories that I can not forget. Beauty brought a new source of happiness to the face of freedom, set new limits that are unachievable for average words. I miss songs and smiles of natural size, joy has surfaced along the rivers of passion.

  • We are missing out in the sea of ​​feelings, Surprise casts dreams abundant in the possibilities that shine in the dark. The heart makes a difference in the world of miracles, mystical goals have the main purpose beyond the limits of imperfect senses.

  • We give promise of success, our strength lies in the heart and mind of the universe. Be positive in your intentions, discipline owls new worlds of achievement. Happiness is attainable with little things; the vision of a great life is planning new horizons of enthusiasm.

  • Love is the main fuel of change; love is the limitless power of our existence and success. The queen of the tender heart opens the bridges that connect imagination and reality, believe in yourself and talents that are unrepeatable.


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You are a great poet. Hahahaha.
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You showed me a fire in your eyes, you left me memories that I can not forget. Beauty brought a new source of happiness to the face of freedom, set new limits that are unachievable for average words. I miss songs and smiles of natural size, joy has surfaced along the rivers of passion.

These lines touch my heart. Great word they are.

Awesome comment

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You are always on point again. Most of your words can be used to relate other life activities. Thanks for sharing.
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beautiful POEM I comment with this

sunshine hugging with raindrops be a rainbow full of beauty
not just a rainbow, but a strand of spectrum of enthusiasm
when a soul can absorb all the luminous colors
then back to white without spot
it was a song of praise that cleansed itself of the shackles of the past
so that you can enter this metaphor in all soul
if you think you can only do one thing
then do it wholeheartedly
in order to clearly color the spirit of your life
recognize your very deep soul
to be able to look at a bright future
entered through the door of wise knowledge
with a definite step develop your wings
because you are yourself
can be tough and upright in the storms of life's challenges thanks....upvote me

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Nice poem. My favourite line is:

Love is the main fuel of change; love is the limitless power of our existence and success

I am glad you like it

I haven't been by to read one of your poems in a while, but I'm sure glad I took a moment today. I love how you talk about spiritual matters in a precise way that gives Beauty to the world. I also enjoy the unique flavor of your words. 😎

That poetry of yours is full of love, and it seems that it is for someone very special that woke up in you an infinite feeling and stronger than fire, blessed be that person in your life, greetings.

Impressive the passion with which you write your poetry this is the estracto that I liked "Love is the main fuel of change, love is the unlimited power of our existence and success." The queen of the tender heart opens the bridges that connect the imagination and the reality, believe in you and in talents that are unrepeatable. "
Magistral @dobartim

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