Through The Fog of The Ideal
Reality is beautiful when we believe in ourselves, we achieve top results through the creative activity of Surrealism. The popularity of interest throws a new light on the streets of love, we have sunk into the deepest dreams of illusion and passion.
We believe in sincere people and false prophets, we have replaced original sources of knowledge for jewellery and gold. Rich money makes money while others stand in the darkness of ignorance, now there is a gentle silence between us and success.
The fruits of the mind turn the same wave of energy to infinity of imagination, we have created miracles and remained at the beginning of spiritual development. Sincere love creates the magic of eternity, touching the perfection of the universe with the vibration of thought.
Far oasis and great surprises come in the perfect gift, you have become an untouchable ideal for my eyes. You left the traces on my soul, the heart strayed into other dimensions while you look at me as a little child. Wake me up beside you, lift me up to the heights of a free wise man.
- Original poetry written by @dobartim
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@dobartim Outstanding Poetry, a Rhythm in every lines, I just loved to read it.
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Having a good thought towards ourselves in dealing with our shortcomings can never be out of the order on the ladder of greatness. This is why you see the rich getting richer while the poor on the other hands are getting poorer. What actually dictates the differences is just the power, the will, the power of positive thoughts and the level of understanding that they already had and in turn will be pushing them forward into having a lot. To have this, one needs to have that believe in oneself as seen here today, here is a great poem of knowledge to enrich our souls with today. Thanks for this soft one today.
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Knowledge is wealth but wealth is not knowledge. While others strive for knowledge to change their status, many just blindly go after wealth thinking all that is good comes along with it. The end never justifies the means. The means rather justifies the end.
I love how the poem built with the contrast of reality and imagination and idealism. Then climaxes with the character talking about his or her chosen middle ground. Ignoring all that is wrong in his or her world, just content with his or her little perfection. Beautiful piece
Thank you
Your poetry is beautiful.
Facing reality with everything you've got is the thing we all have to achieve and believe me or not people even don't think about these things.
and about love
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Your poetry is unique in a way I cannot explain@dobartim