Image, Haiku [ENG/ITA]

marcoriccardi (59) 5 years ago

I think this is what the Japanese call wabi-sabi: the melancholic beauty emanated from old, worn things. Things that make think about the transience of life.

f3nix (59) 5 years ago

Si quella é l'idea .. più un tocco di sana alienazione occidentale. Ti é piaciuta o c'é qualcosa che secondo te stona o é migliorabile?

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marcoriccardi (59) 5 years ago

Scusa, non avevo visto la domanda... a me piace molto così com'è

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f3nix (59) 5 years ago

Bene. Apprezzo sempre i tuoi consigli come sai.

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calluna (63) 5 years ago

The framing of this is so beautiful, the parallels between the balloons, left hanging, and the silhouette of the trees in the fading of the day alone evoke so much about the impermanence of life which you capture so well in your words.

f3nix (59) 5 years ago

Thanks, you are in total syntony with the mood of this! Actually, my worry was to keep pace in the haiku with the quality of the photo.

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theironfelix (62) 5 years ago (edited)

Ah, what a blerrie time the person in the frame is having. I say, my friend, yah struck an expresso depresso haiku this time about. Especially at the end of one's career to the time of transition to the eternal slumber. Now begins the recollection of what one has done... Upvot'd and resteem'd.

f3nix (59) 5 years ago

Thanks my friend. Expresso depresso made me laugh. Yes you also understood the mood and I don't hide that I'm very pleased by that. Time passing, a short squallid party, then working life goes on in the company's plot.

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erh.germany (64) 5 years ago

It reminded me of my visit to Sylt the other day. Besides the natural beauties, there were so many things from the 60's and 70's that were sinful in building, which radiate a similar charm as your haiku. This contrast from dull to fresh and from old to young, from used to new ... it's special because otherwise you wouldn't be able to tell the beautiful from the ugly. So the mood is also from cloudy in contrast to cheerful.

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f3nix (59) 5 years ago

Thank you friend. Learning about your feelings resonating with mine ones, only appearently hidden behind lost items, ghosts, cement, pathetic vestiges of the past. With love and squallor, f3n.

erh.germany (64) 5 years ago

With love and squallor,

:) why the squalor? ... just kidding. I just wanted to wave another hello.

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f3nix (59) 5 years ago

That's taken from the title of a Salinger's novel btw .. ciao! 😉

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aurodivys (58) 5 years ago

This is a beautiful and festive haiku. The image is appropriate for inspiration in joys. I enjoyed it. Although I don't speak Italian, in my attempt at pronunciation it is heard harmoniously. Greetings, @f3nix.

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f3nix (59) 5 years ago

Gracias @aurodivys por tu querido mensaje! I'm always amazed how an haiku or an image can resound so differently depending by who reads it 🙂

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wonderwop (66) 5 years ago

I hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving @f3nix I was just thinking about you while learning my Partiko app. Have a great weekend. I hope you're doing well.

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f3nix (59) 5 years ago

Oh thank you Bruni! I hope you had a great one too... here in Italy we don't celebrate it but for sure I had a great weekend and finally managed to post something more on this blog. You're very much missed in the Finish the Story contest, my friend.

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