Leaving a Mark

in #poetry6 years ago



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I’m half in
And half out


Trying on these Times
That never fit;

So many parts
Worn out—

Friends gone
So many splits,

Hope threadbare

Shiny
But glossy from wear;

The tailor retailored
From a different era.

We live in the same city
But don't see the same things—

You see buildings
And I see memories.

Times change
And styles too

It’s the fashion now
To discard worn shoes

No one to cobble
Or make repairs

Easier to trash
Until nothing is rare

...

No patina, no history,
No signs of wear

Nothing restored
Or treasured with care

Every thing recycled
Until the past disappears…

And no trace left
To show we were here.



© 2018, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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Tanta verdad resumida en tan pocos versos, @johnjgeddes. Tantas generaciones anteriores bajarían la cabeza ante tanta destrucción. El hombre es el único animal que sabe que sabe. Tú con tu escritura seguramente serás reconocido en el tiempo! En cambio muchos, dejarán su huella de otra forma. Cual marca en árbol, el hombre deja su marca en la destrucción, para dividir. Los seres sin pasado son seres sin memoria, presas fáciles, propensos a cometer los mismos errores. Un día nos veremos al espejo y no sabremos reconocernos! Miraremos atrás para encontrarnos y no habrá huellas, y será ya muy tarde, porque estaremos perdidos.

Gracias por tus amables palabras, Nancy. Vivimos en una cultura desechable, desechable y reverencia a la tradición y el pasado se está desvaneciendo. Traté de retratar esto en el nivel personal y social

Now this girl cobbles her boots. I wore the same boots for a couple decades until the leather gave out. I like the energy that well-loved items can contain. Loved this poem, John:)

Yes, the same reason I love antiques - they bend time and space into the shape of that era

Beautiful thought put together by you in even more beautiful words.
So much changes with time and yet I see that the world barely takes time to stop by and notice it.

Thanks, @hashcash - so true...

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