ENCHANTED {An Original Poetry ➕ Notes & Literary appreciation}

in #poetry6 years ago

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Like the mistress of the night,
Wearing darkened robes and omnious cloak,
The dazzling of the moon's brilliance,
peeping through the misty forest,
as she crunches grasses and leaves dead butterflies in her wake.
blood is her lipstick her eyes are dreamy and dreary
spelling a chant into sweet hallucinations.


Enchanted,
your grace is a grandeur imagined,
like pinky flowers and thorn,
a queen of the sea, reborn
the door to Asgard opens and Odin beckons
with a wicked smile, you send hearts flying out of bodies,
like exorcism of the holy papacy
threading through dimensions and plain.


Enchanted,
Skin bathed in elixir of immortality
as she dazzles into tongues and languages unknown.
forests magically grown,
portals in Hades revealed and known
princess of the night,
In cloaks, a beauty in hood,
dazzling as the creamy embers of blue flames


Enchanted,
like ballet on broomsticks,
lost in the tenderness of the air,
Of a being bodily endowed,
like a brightly lit chandelier on a silent night.
She's poison laced in a flagon
like a spell unwritten, candles flicking,
trees zapping, the trees moaning,
accompanied by friendly tornadoe,
yet soft as music from the lips of Orpheus

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POETIC NOTES & ANALYSIS


Enchanted is a poem that reveals a magical influence of a damsel, a woman strong in the practices of magic of which the poet tends to describe his mind-blowing and exhilarating experience with this woman. Of course he wasn't really a victim of this woman's magical beauty, but he could feel there was a more powerful force behind the beauty, as it's not just about the looks, but the influence and control of it over people.

The poet explains circumstances detailing the reason why he feels this beauty is extra terrestrial. The damsel in question wears cloak, she's always seen in the middle of the night when the moonlight is just very dim above the skies, the poet uses imageries too, like when he painted her as a chandeliers dimly lit in the midnight, it spoke about her qualities too, her necromancy, traveling to other realms on broomstick and probably astral travel as well.

The poet however revealed in the last stanza that the cause of her beauty is unknown, he once felt her lipstick felt and look like blood, possibly another view into vampirism.
The poet however acknowledges the fact that she is nevertheless stunning and so graceful to behold, with basically her antique style of dressing which of course seems to hide her true personality.


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Written, edited & analysed

By @Josediccus

10/7/2018


"Steemian Mantra"


This is my entry to @Margaretwise poemchallenge


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JOSEPH C.IKECHUKWU

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