SAUNTERING INTO PONDER (An Original Poetry ➕ Literary Appreciations & Poetic Analysis) 📝
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Meandering into spirit zone
thoughts ramblings like shrubs
eerie howls, the heart feeding on fear
the feet dipped in dew
like a witches steering of stew
ambient moans over violent squeals
walking aimlessly in chains
mind away on broom travels
still, still seems the tornadoes is come
Slay the carnality
and herald the soul's awakening
travel beyond terrestrial territory
into the solace of purgatory
nurturing the leviathan
unseen by the ignorance of the eye
fertilize it's brawn for a greater good
into an familiar abyss
built by the potency of the imagination
The speech is a traveller
Upon miry highway
where fiery monsters abide
but it freely moves upon dimensions
upon opaque empires
and beyond the body's capability
stumbling upon unpopular debris
uncovering memories buried deep
and shedding light on carrions
buzzing with crows and reeking.
Drift into a celestial state
allowing the essence to genuflect
the truth is a proven doubt
the body may see an the mind may feel
so spin the spirits
so clandestine events may reveal
harvesting concealed roots and berries
wishing to hibernate and bury
saunter into ponder
your Olympus unexplored.
POETIC NOTES & ANALYSIS 📝
SAUNTERING INTO PONDER is a piece that encourages the mind to travel into it's darkest and deepest abyss in other to uncover hidden things about the self. The poet is of the opinion that the mind is a keeper of secrets and most times a person may not even know so many horrendous events that's happen to them in the past because these events are so gory the mind choose not to remember it, instead burying it deep where it's totally forgotten and erased from the memory.
The poet sees himself as a traveller who is walking softly and gently into himself which he's not aware of. He takes it that there's so much to him more than the usual person he is. He feels that deep down there's a beast buried inside of him, which has been locked away by himself in other to present a much more milder version of him.
But the poet feels it's time to uncover the other him that's locked away from him, who knows there may be darkened secrets about him that needed to be revealed
Written, edited & analysed
By @Josediccus
13/9/2018
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JOSEPH C.IKECHUKWU
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In this poem the poet expresses his feeling about the darkness side of the world. Hey vikrams fickle minded he unable to control is feeling behaviour mind, this poem is full of mystery, includes man's Second form as a devil.. don't try to wake up this evils.
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