THE SWEET BEGINNINGS (An Original Poetry ➕ Analysis & Notes)
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Memories are gone,
Of the naked blue seas,
with the smouldering lathers,
like sizzling of barley in malt,
Of when it was us, and when it was nothing,
the green trees, bears witness,
to a beginning was a marvelous divine,
When the heart was mild with ignorance,
Days have trudged on,
When Adam and eve were dressed in nothing,
reveling in the spree of boisterous September,
When the sun and moon,
Comes out like couples to play,
beyond the hued mountains, getting undressed for dusk,
The chirping of the cricket,
Music to the ears,
the musing of the mule,
splendid to the spleen.
Many yesterdays have died,
When it was tender flowers,on the boulevards
the gentle kisses of the evening air,
that brings orgasm to the skin,
and the gentle lovely touches of my mademoiselle,
it was romance and giselle,
a beautiful bard played to serenade her beauty
moments of the beginning,
all gone with the wind,
The sperm whale and the seagulls,
the foaming sweetness of coffee,
On a beautiful evening weather,
a testament of the new begining,
Where we shine in all truth and no lies,
like the gentle caress of the dove 🕊
the sweet begininng lingers still in the memories,
POETIC NOTES, LITERARY APPRECIATION & ANALYSIS 📝
Memories of the past are always so strong on the mind, the situations leading to this is because of either how painful of was or how emotional beautiful it is to the mind in other words the poet's moods is calming he's relishing the beauty of how it is to be bare, definitely naked, the last stanza gave away the setting of the poem, and the mention of sea animals clearly shows that he has a home near the seas.
The poet is however dissapointed on how the influx of industries and pollution is killing the beauty of how nature was in the beginning of time, nevertheless he's definitely agreeing to the fact that change is inevitable but the changes to how nature and it's environment use to be is totally uncalled for.
The poet however did not only address a natural prospective, he also adressed the issue of relationships, love, emotions and how the process were.
In a nutshell, the poet feels that love isn't what it use to be, in the past it was symbolic because things like flowers to doorstep, sitting close to each other, the beautiful kisses to the forehead are all but gone, and the present day definition of love is impaling and grotesque.
Written, edited & analysed
By @Josediccus
10/7/2018
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