NNatural Gen #11: River (free verse)- Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge - Day 95, Poem 85
Hi!
I’m back on Day 95 for my 85th Entry to the Steemit School Poetry 100-Day Challenge by @d-pend.
I'll be glad should you be able to read and comment.
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River
Waters convolute
furiously.
They hit the rocks
and riot.
The speed of fall
pushes them forward
to drag it all
and stream along.
They make their way
among the stones;
go past everything,
unforgiving.
But once then steeping slope
is left behind,
and waters go serene
in this new world,
you can go on a boat
and gently glide,
for waters left alone
are just so quiet.
A Personal Comment:
As I have said ten poems ago, Natural Gen is a series of minimalistic poems. The eleventh one, "River" is about things which make you mad.
Here, the link to Steemit School Discord.
- All images illustrating the poem are mine (taken with my cellphone, a Lenovo Note).
- I've modified the images using imgur.com.
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Felicitaciones por haber llegado al día 95 de 100. Todo un reto bien llevado. Me imagino que ha sido un camino de aprendizaje. Esperaré la versión en español.
Saludos, @marlyncabrera.
¡Gracias! Así es, @sandracabrera. Si me lo volvieran a proponer, lo volvería a aceptar. Ya hablaré de eso (del aprendizaje). Saludos y un abrazo :-)