NNatural Gen #11: River (free verse)- Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge - Day 95, Poem 85

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Hi!

I’m back on Day 95 for my 85th Entry to the Steemit School Poetry 100-Day Challenge by @d-pend.

I'll be glad should you be able to read and comment.

Best of lucks to all contestants.

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Natural Gen #11:

River

                                            Waters convolute
                                            furiously.
                                            They hit the rocks
                                            and riot.

                                            The speed of fall
                                            pushes them forward
                                            to drag it all
                                            and stream along.
                                            They make their way
                                            among the stones;
                                            go past everything,
                                            unforgiving.

                                            But once then steeping slope
                                            is left behind,
                                            and waters go serene
                                            in this new world,
                                            you can go on a boat
                                            and gently glide,
                                            for waters left alone
                                            are just so quiet.


A Personal Comment:

As I have said ten poems ago, Natural Gen is a series of minimalistic poems. The eleventh one, "River" is about things which make you mad.

Thanks for reading.

See you tomorrow with another poem.

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  • All images illustrating the poem are mine (taken with my cellphone, a Lenovo Note).
  • I've modified the images using imgur.com.


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Uncomplicated article. I learned a lot of interesting and cognitive. I'm screwed up with you, I'll be glad to reciprocal subscription))

Felicitaciones por haber llegado al día 95 de 100. Todo un reto bien llevado. Me imagino que ha sido un camino de aprendizaje. Esperaré la versión en español.
Saludos, @marlyncabrera.

¡Gracias! Así es, @sandracabrera. Si me lo volvieran a proponer, lo volvería a aceptar. Ya hablaré de eso (del aprendizaje). Saludos y un abrazo :-)

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