A Prayer In Bad Weather

in #poetry6 years ago

A prayer in bad weather
Though knees are too old to endure the ache of supplication
And invocation is useless from behind the wheel

May the tires not skid as I pull into the favorite parking space
May grace and good intentions rise from a mouth gripped with grief

May the raindrops not land as cold as numbers
On shoulders already ruined by rime

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Beautiful and it does rhyme - just not the usual way ;)
The photo is very suitable - your own @pinkspectre?

NICE , very nice
take care nature then nature will be care you

Nice touchy but sad poem!!

Thats a really pretty picture! :D

It's always interesting to me when I find poetry that doesn't rhyme- which is something that I've oft believed poetry to require. It's rare that something not written in verse speaks to me, but for whatever reason this one did. Thank you for sharing it.

~ Mako

very well, your lyrics invite you to overcome, overcome barriers and conquer battles, excellent lyrics, thanks for sharing

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