I CHOOSE YOU - A POEM
They say a photograph can speak a thousand words, but I wonder if pixels on a screen can really relay feelings as expressively as the written word
If you could start again, would you still choose me?
If you knew our path would meander so much, spiraling down and rocketing up again, would you still choose me?
If you knew times would be so tough, would you still choose me?
If you knew we would reveal our most secret selves, the rawest insides, bleeding so profusely, would you still choose me?
I choose your heart
I choose your passion
I choose your strength
Our paths were chosen before we were born, crossing again and again inevitably, regardless of our own choices
Forever entwined, like roots tangling tightly in the soil, growing upwards, faces towards the heavens
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What a beautiful poem, @princessmewmew. In your words there are doubts, but they are also your words reaffirmation to the path you chose, to the roots that sustain you. There are relationships that were made before the womb, which are written in the pages of the great book. Surely there are blurs, curved lines, but they are still the protagonists of their own story. A hug
thank you Nancy! I must say I am completely out of practise, but it feels good to let the creativity flow.
i wish I could be as poetic as you, just look at this comment!
HOT DAMN GURL
I wish I could insert the sound of a bunch of turtlenecks snapping their fingers in a jazz club..
I mean that in the most positive way possible.. loved the flow
Hehehe! That is a wonderful compliment, thank you so much!
@princessmewmew you are a wonderful poetess, beautiful poem, I believe in eternity I am sure we know each other in a preexistent life.
thank you! Yes, I agree, I believe our stories are written before we are born.
Thats true what they say that a picture can speak a thousand words, but a poem can spur the mind to think of a thousand more
is true. Perhaps it's just my big mouth, but I always feel the need to speak my feelings, versus letting the viewer of the image imagine their own poem.
Thats a good way to be, I am not that good with writing my feelings or thoughts so I let my photo do the talking, but love those who can write so beautifully and share thoughts and poems such as you do
ah shucks. thank you x
Wow! This poem speaks a million words.
Nice one Mewmew. I salute your poetic acumen
thanks guy, I tried :D
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