polluted dreams (original poetry)

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Another night of brevity comin atcha! Hope you guys are doing better than the couple in this poem. Seems like they are on the verge of something bad. Let me know in the replies below if you can relate or even better if it all worked out fine...Then you can tell us your secrets 😍.


 
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     polluted dreams

┈┈┈┈┈∘┈˃̶˂┈∘┈┈┈┈┈
 
deep and congesting
ribs expand
around
polluted dreams

gasping at
purified moments
when oxygen
tastes like spring

until fallen petals
become part
of the debris
cluttering the air

and lungs collapse
choking on
shallow breaths
of you


poetry by: @thiscrazylife
in ink...we stain
✎﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏


 
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Beautiful poetry . Really heart touching

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Thanks so much!

Your very welcome

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