reflecting through the pane (original poetry)

in #poetry6 years ago

People argue, it happens. Family members, significant others, fact is, you're never gonna see eye to eye on everything with everyone. Life doesn't work like that. What's important, is how it's handled. The same method that works for some may not work for others. Doesn't mean there isn't a path to forgiveness. You just have to find the path smoothest for your situation. We all interpret things different, there's billions of individual views of the same world. Take a minute and peek through someone's window. Before you regret waiting til the curtains are drawn.


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   reflecting through the pane

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sorry wraps remorse
like a gift
the fancy ribbon
even shines
in early morning rays
reflecting
through the pane

as if words contain
night’s bare sky
and if i accept
your apology
it would combust
and drifting sparks
would replace
each star that died

but they can’t

i might forgive
but midnight remains
too dark to forget

we’re going to
have to fight
our way passed
the black hole
you created
and hope we find
new constellations
 


 
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poetry by: @thiscrazylife
in ink...we stain
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i really like it, envoked a lot of imagery with efficient use of language

thanks i appreciate it.

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