Poem / Listen...
Listen...
There's just to much that goes unsaid
Like how many times I wish you were dead
There's too much pain to hide
There's too much guilt trapped inside
I want too release it but don't know how
I'm scared if I do it might be discarded under the bow
I want you to realise this isn't for attention
That maybe I need a little more affection
That perhaps I'm being drowned in your images of perfection
And that I'm slowly being sucked in by deception
Into a new alternate dimention
Open your ears
Listen to my fears
Take some time to mend the cracking
Before I take a knife and start hacking
By Ethan
2017/11/11
For a friend of mine...
Do you own this poem. Which country ?
wonderfull...
It is mine I live in South Africa
That was a good poem and I’m glad you shared it with us.
Such a great poem about relationships .
great one to put to music! ... powerful though!.. shocking at the end!... A great one to explain the depths of pain!
Great Work Ethan!
Thank you. I would love to try composing music someday
that would be beautiful!
So emotive, you know how to catch the readers and make it yours through your poem.. Nice work